All Comments on 'Liana's Secret Garden'

I think you mean 'My Secret Garden' not 'The Secret Garden' which is somewhat different - a lovely children's book! Otherwise very nicely done. I would have liked them to have actually gone into the garden with a spot of wandering around naked, touching and smelling the flowers gradually leading into sexual touching and outdoor nudity, perhaps with the sex (at least the first go) outside. Maybe Liana talking about her fantasies and sort of acting them out. But that is just my preferences creeping in! I liked the idea of Liana saying "What a nice stiff, young cock" and the way Liana made him pull his cock down and let it bound up again!

Definitely do the next day.

From my elementary school days were those two 'kids' and this was a delight to read in the manner the sex transpired. Keep going with your stories. This was the first I have enjoyed reading of yours.