Hmmmm, where have I read that before bonny? Oh, I remember, those are the words I use to describe you daily. Must have impressed you since you're copying them word for word. You do know yourself well bonny?
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Anonymous04/24/16
Stupid wife and stupid husband
Husband - Why Tommy?" was my next question. "He's everything you despise -- loud, drunk, obnoxious."
Then Wife explains he really wasn't a braggart who screwed married women for sport and brags about it, etc., etc. Really, isn't that what he did with wife. I expect he is telling stories about the latest wife he screwed and her cuckold.
anon.1
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Anonymous05/01/16
Wtf?
Our leading male character must have the smallest set of balls on the planet.
All he talks about is his small dick, his small bladder, his lack of courage and agression.
Tommy would be leaving the hot tub with his teeth in a bag and his big dick bent in half. Then the wife would be getting bent over the side of the hot tub and fucked as punishment for just looking at the big dumb fuck :-)
I know from my own experience that after being fucked like she was she will never be happy until she finds another one. I found one of my wifes lovers for her and she and he were "together" for about 4 years even going on short holidays together.
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Anonymous05/19/16
CUT THE BITCH AND CUT HER DEEP TO THE BONEAND WATCH HER BLEAD OUT. SLIMEY BITCH OUT OF YOUR LIFE SHE IS NO GOOD.
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Anonymous05/22/16
Truth of it
Monkeytail10103, Giving the benefit of the doubt that this submission is somewhat based in fact and not just a heck of a story,and unless there's a 4th installment that chronicles major changes in Jill's emotions, attitude and your relationship, you should've kept walking. First off it was her decision to start sucking Tommy at the hot tub, when she should've ran after you when she felt weird.Yes you should've pulled her out of the hot tub and dragged her to your room, even if Tommy didn't give her bathing suit bottoms back, but she's an adult capable of making decisions.
All you needed to know about Jill's feelings for you and forTommy were summed up by her not being able to answer your statement "So you really only want me to stay because he's leaving' and hers " It was Tommy's last night here and he wanted me to stay with him." She just told you that she was physically and emotionally tied to him. Then confirmed it through her opinions of him, the way they acted when you saw them together at dinner, and her account of when he made love to her.
Fast forward a few months,as you hint at in the beginning of installment 1, after you fucked her (which by the way she now had you) when you took a break listening to her rationalize everything and you decide not to leave. It's obvious what's happened. Since Tommy is attending the college in the city where you live, He and Jill have reconnected, hooked up and are fucking and spending time together. And if not him, she's doing other young men. Can't believe (probably because that isn't me) you enjoyand or put up with being a cuck.
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Anonymous06/05/16
How can he look himself in the mirror?
How can he look himself in the mirror? What does he sees a weak wimp neglected in his anniversary vacation? She was back because her lover left and didn't take her with him. No matter what her lover said or may have inferred, you don't marry a slut, you fuck her. Poor husband, what a spineless male. She has no respect or use for him any longer and will be humiliated again in the future. Why not, she got away with it.
I have to say I enjoy your stories very much. It is well written and definitely keeps your interest to the end. That said, I don't feel the ending is there. I feel that the story was rushed at the end and to me seems unrealistic. He is willing to forgive his wife by the drop of a dress after she has spent the night making love to another man? I would love to find out what happened afterwards.
You are a good storyteller and I would love to read more of your stories in the future!
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Anonymous07/23/16
I can't figure out who the bigger pussy is. The author or the male characters he writes.
Maybe a tie?
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Anonymous08/03/16
rant
I see marsh mellow guys in real life and just want to shake then. Wake the fuck up and get some balls. If you would have added a revenge toward the end with him kicking ass and duping that bitch on the street, just a thought :-)
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Anonymous08/04/16
people like this makes me wish for more violence in the world. people that would take this whore cut her up in little pieces and feed her to pigs
The trouble is the ending is ambiguous at best. He never didn't believe she was desirable and nothing he does will stop her from knowing he does not compare. This fuck and any that occur in the future will remind her that he can never satisfy her like Tommy, and he knows it. He knows that she had many chances to choose and never chose him.
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Anonymous08/18/16
cuckhold
I would have just have walked out and not asked for explanations, and waved good by to the cheat.
I rather liked this. The idea that a faithful wife will all of a sudden snap at the sight of a giant pecker (as happens in so many of these stories) and her husband would shrivel in the glory of her lust is just porn logic, pure and simple, although I suspect it really happens sometimes. What I liked about this story is not the sex so much (I was kind of hoping Jill would do Tommy's friends, too), but that I liked the characters (well, not Tommy so much, who is just an over privileged asshole no matter how Jill tries to justify him) who seemed like real people who expressed real pain. I like heartfelt dialogue more than giant dicks. The ending is a little unsettling. When Jill displays her body with all the marks Tommy has left on her (both inside and out), she asks him if he wants to make love to her of fuck her. So he chooses fuck, and that seems to satisfy her, but after Tommy made unequaled, transcendent love to what else is there left?
I can't believe what I just read.
Nothing personal, but it seemed like a college educated writer writing a third grader's story.
Sorry. Just not my cup-o-tea.
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Anonymous09/22/16
Disgusting
I can't believe what I just read. I though it would lead to something moral. EWWWW
I like this story so much I re-read it last night. In my earlier post I bemoaned a little that Jill didn’t have sex with Tommy’s friends, but maybe she did. Could there be hints that she did? Consider the situation: Jill is having dinner with Tommy and his two roommates. They’re drinking and laughing, and Jill, already besotted by Tommy, who’s brought out the adventurer in her, is also a little speculative about these other two fine young men. It’s Tommy’s last night and she wants to give him a going away present, so she (or maybe Tommy) suggests a gang bang. So they go up to their room and start things off by ritually shaving Jill’s pussy. Maybe she does it for herself, or maybe one of them does it for her. She then has sex with them, one at a time or all at once, which would explain the bite marks (things got a little spirited) and the semen all over her body; it doesn’t necessarily have to all be Tommy’s. Maybe that is the rest of the story.
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Anonymous10/04/16
Great
This was a really fantastic story, with great pacing. Just the right amount of sex, humiliation, and raw passion. Please keep writing!
I would have been gone after the first time...
He is nothing but a wimp and cluck...
And her? Well, you read the story...
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Anonymous10/10/16
I had to rate it fairly high, but.....
What a whore, what a wimp, and on a significant anniversary no less. You have to be a good writer to make me despise her so much, and him too for his weakness.
I can't believe how much I hate this woman. She has absolutely no redeeming qualities and their marriage is absolutely toast. And I don't think I have ever read about a bigger wimp on this site.
Disgusting. I want to vomit. But it was very very well written to make me feel this way.
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Anonymous10/23/16
Great Story, please finish it!
WOW, what a great story, so far; one of my, it not the, favourite. Thank you for writing such a great story, I love the characters and I really empathise with Jill.
I so want to know how it finishes; what happened on her second night with Tommy, (making love again rather than sex?) who shaved her, has she been with Tommy's friends (I hope not, and she is just with Tommy) and will she see Tommy again? (I hope she does!) I love the way that Jill and Tommy go from just sex to making love, I can't see how she can go back to her husband after that, great sex and love, what more could a girl want.
Some of the criticisms here are unfair, I love the idea of a ordinary wife losing her inhibitions and acting as Jill does when confronted with a sexy young man who wants her, especially as her marriage seems a little stale and her husband seems a bit of a wimp, especially compared to the dominant, confident Tommy. I think a lot of married middle aged women probably have that fantasy, although haven't all acted on it! I totally get where she is coming from - go for it girl!
Anyway please finish the story, I can't wait to find out how it ends, as I said my hope is Jill ends up with Tommy, perhaps with a baby!
I can't believe so many people are willing to go bareback.
Then not even douche before offering husband stretched out pussy.
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Anonymous10/30/16
WTF
I'm sure that this wimp will have a very happy marriage watching his wife fuck others!
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Anonymous11/01/16
May it be that you are only a real asshole who thinks he can write?! MINUS 5*!!!
That author is either one of the biggest cuckold/wimp faggot or he is only brain sick and needs mental help!
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Anonymous02/14/17
Dumb
This husband is as short of brains as he thinks his cock is in length. To ignore a beautiful wife and then let someone have her for sex on your anniversary vacation is really hard to condone followed by taking her back after want she told him about the time with Tommy. Sure he realized his "screwups" but it is hard to believe that his "education" will last.
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Anonymous02/15/17
1*
TRASH is to mild a word for this shit. I can't believe the scum bags that think shit like this is erotic. Perverted sickos.
English
You Suck
Stop writing!
in honor of the asshole of Lit
Hmmmm, where have I read that before bonny? Oh, I remember, those are the words I use to describe you daily. Must have impressed you since you're copying them word for word. You do know yourself well bonny?
Stupid wife and stupid husband
Husband - Why Tommy?" was my next question. "He's everything you despise -- loud, drunk, obnoxious."
Then Wife explains he really wasn't a braggart who screwed married women for sport and brags about it, etc., etc. Really, isn't that what he did with wife. I expect he is telling stories about the latest wife he screwed and her cuckold.
anon.1
Wtf?
Our leading male character must have the smallest set of balls on the planet.
All he talks about is his small dick, his small bladder, his lack of courage and agression.
Tommy would be leaving the hot tub with his teeth in a bag and his big dick bent in half. Then the wife would be getting bent over the side of the hot tub and fucked as punishment for just looking at the big dumb fuck :-)
lovely ending but
I know from my own experience that after being fucked like she was she will never be happy until she finds another one. I found one of my wifes lovers for her and she and he were "together" for about 4 years even going on short holidays together.
CUT THE BITCH AND CUT HER DEEP TO THE BONEAND WATCH HER BLEAD OUT. SLIMEY BITCH OUT OF YOUR LIFE SHE IS NO GOOD.
Truth of it
Monkeytail10103, Giving the benefit of the doubt that this submission is somewhat based in fact and not just a heck of a story,and unless there's a 4th installment that chronicles major changes in Jill's emotions, attitude and your relationship, you should've kept walking. First off it was her decision to start sucking Tommy at the hot tub, when she should've ran after you when she felt weird.Yes you should've pulled her out of the hot tub and dragged her to your room, even if Tommy didn't give her bathing suit bottoms back, but she's an adult capable of making decisions.
All you needed to know about Jill's feelings for you and forTommy were summed up by her not being able to answer your statement "So you really only want me to stay because he's leaving' and hers " It was Tommy's last night here and he wanted me to stay with him." She just told you that she was physically and emotionally tied to him. Then confirmed it through her opinions of him, the way they acted when you saw them together at dinner, and her account of when he made love to her.
Fast forward a few months,as you hint at in the beginning of installment 1, after you fucked her (which by the way she now had you) when you took a break listening to her rationalize everything and you decide not to leave. It's obvious what's happened. Since Tommy is attending the college in the city where you live, He and Jill have reconnected, hooked up and are fucking and spending time together. And if not him, she's doing other young men. Can't believe (probably because that isn't me) you enjoyand or put up with being a cuck.
How can he look himself in the mirror?
How can he look himself in the mirror? What does he sees a weak wimp neglected in his anniversary vacation? She was back because her lover left and didn't take her with him. No matter what her lover said or may have inferred, you don't marry a slut, you fuck her. Poor husband, what a spineless male. She has no respect or use for him any longer and will be humiliated again in the future. Why not, she got away with it.
Finish the story
Finish the story
Finish
I have to say I enjoy your stories very much. It is well written and definitely keeps your interest to the end. That said, I don't feel the ending is there. I feel that the story was rushed at the end and to me seems unrealistic. He is willing to forgive his wife by the drop of a dress after she has spent the night making love to another man? I would love to find out what happened afterwards.
You are a good storyteller and I would love to read more of your stories in the future!
I can't figure out who the bigger pussy is. The author or the male characters he writes.
Maybe a tie?
rant
I see marsh mellow guys in real life and just want to shake then. Wake the fuck up and get some balls. If you would have added a revenge toward the end with him kicking ass and duping that bitch on the street, just a thought :-)
people like this makes me wish for more violence in the world. people that would take this whore cut her up in little pieces and feed her to pigs
Not believable
The trouble is the ending is ambiguous at best. He never didn't believe she was desirable and nothing he does will stop her from knowing he does not compare. This fuck and any that occur in the future will remind her that he can never satisfy her like Tommy, and he knows it. He knows that she had many chances to choose and never chose him.
cuckhold
I would have just have walked out and not asked for explanations, and waved good by to the cheat.
porn logic
I rather liked this. The idea that a faithful wife will all of a sudden snap at the sight of a giant pecker (as happens in so many of these stories) and her husband would shrivel in the glory of her lust is just porn logic, pure and simple, although I suspect it really happens sometimes. What I liked about this story is not the sex so much (I was kind of hoping Jill would do Tommy's friends, too), but that I liked the characters (well, not Tommy so much, who is just an over privileged asshole no matter how Jill tries to justify him) who seemed like real people who expressed real pain. I like heartfelt dialogue more than giant dicks. The ending is a little unsettling. When Jill displays her body with all the marks Tommy has left on her (both inside and out), she asks him if he wants to make love to her of fuck her. So he chooses fuck, and that seems to satisfy her, but after Tommy made unequaled, transcendent love to what else is there left?
YIKES!
I can't believe what I just read.
Nothing personal, but it seemed like a college educated writer writing a third grader's story.
Sorry. Just not my cup-o-tea.
Disgusting
I can't believe what I just read. I though it would lead to something moral. EWWWW
The rest of the story
I like this story so much I re-read it last night. In my earlier post I bemoaned a little that Jill didn’t have sex with Tommy’s friends, but maybe she did. Could there be hints that she did? Consider the situation: Jill is having dinner with Tommy and his two roommates. They’re drinking and laughing, and Jill, already besotted by Tommy, who’s brought out the adventurer in her, is also a little speculative about these other two fine young men. It’s Tommy’s last night and she wants to give him a going away present, so she (or maybe Tommy) suggests a gang bang. So they go up to their room and start things off by ritually shaving Jill’s pussy. Maybe she does it for herself, or maybe one of them does it for her. She then has sex with them, one at a time or all at once, which would explain the bite marks (things got a little spirited) and the semen all over her body; it doesn’t necessarily have to all be Tommy’s. Maybe that is the rest of the story.
Great
This was a really fantastic story, with great pacing. Just the right amount of sex, humiliation, and raw passion. Please keep writing!
WTF ??
I would have been gone after the first time...
He is nothing but a wimp and cluck...
And her? Well, you read the story...
I had to rate it fairly high, but.....
What a whore, what a wimp, and on a significant anniversary no less. You have to be a good writer to make me despise her so much, and him too for his weakness.
Wow!
I can't believe how much I hate this woman. She has absolutely no redeeming qualities and their marriage is absolutely toast. And I don't think I have ever read about a bigger wimp on this site.
Disgusting. I want to vomit. But it was very very well written to make me feel this way.
Great Story, please finish it!
WOW, what a great story, so far; one of my, it not the, favourite. Thank you for writing such a great story, I love the characters and I really empathise with Jill.
I so want to know how it finishes; what happened on her second night with Tommy, (making love again rather than sex?) who shaved her, has she been with Tommy's friends (I hope not, and she is just with Tommy) and will she see Tommy again? (I hope she does!) I love the way that Jill and Tommy go from just sex to making love, I can't see how she can go back to her husband after that, great sex and love, what more could a girl want.
Some of the criticisms here are unfair, I love the idea of a ordinary wife losing her inhibitions and acting as Jill does when confronted with a sexy young man who wants her, especially as her marriage seems a little stale and her husband seems a bit of a wimp, especially compared to the dominant, confident Tommy. I think a lot of married middle aged women probably have that fantasy, although haven't all acted on it! I totally get where she is coming from - go for it girl!
Anyway please finish the story, I can't wait to find out how it ends, as I said my hope is Jill ends up with Tommy, perhaps with a baby!
Marriage in trouble
I can't believe so many people are willing to go bareback.
Then not even douche before offering husband stretched out pussy.
WTF
I'm sure that this wimp will have a very happy marriage watching his wife fuck others!
May it be that you are only a real asshole who thinks he can write?! MINUS 5*!!!
That author is either one of the biggest cuckold/wimp faggot or he is only brain sick and needs mental help!
Dumb
This husband is as short of brains as he thinks his cock is in length. To ignore a beautiful wife and then let someone have her for sex on your anniversary vacation is really hard to condone followed by taking her back after want she told him about the time with Tommy. Sure he realized his "screwups" but it is hard to believe that his "education" will last.
1*
TRASH is to mild a word for this shit. I can't believe the scum bags that think shit like this is erotic. Perverted sickos.
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