All Comments on 'A Misfortunate Wife Pt. 01'

40 years of marriage has a lot to tell...Not bad for a introduction...3* for now

Not much of a story. Okay as a stroke piece. Unfortunately, I'm not here for that!

Gave it 2*s. Looking at Ronk66 track record. We will not be seeing a 2nd chapter. That is no loss, lol!!

AMerryman

You're on a porn site on the world wide web. No one believes a word coming out of your mouth. And if this was true it really makes you look dumber than a rock. Get an editor then get a decent story line. This was awful.

War hero, blah blah, wrong word in the title, crude writing; not much good good going on here. Please don't waste our time by writing more. 22c7

Interesting. Not enough detail....yet. Please continue.

Too short and choppy and poor character development

I find it interesting that the four that have criticized the story do so under the cover of anonymity. While four have criticized, eight have liked the story. It is quite easy to call one names when your name appears no where. Congratulations for being non-consequential.

about a man fucking his own wife, even if he isn't married to her yet. 1*

Cut back on crude talk with girl he likes , cunt?...

It is interesting, Ron.

For me, my lack of computer savy caused me to get locked out of the biography section. Then I tried a different way and failed again. Consequently I locked myself out as AMerryman and AMERRYMAN. That's on me.

I must add my comments would not be any different if I did have a chance to make up, I mean write up my biography.

This scene was too short, didn't have a point, and you have never completed anything past the 1st chapter to this day!

I hope this was interesting and enlightened your day.

I look forward to your next effort.

AMerryman

Seems like we've got 45 years, 8 months (at least) remaining in the story?

If only you had kept your writing in then realm of the reasonable, you would have been ok.

If course it's a true stoey, just like all your other work.

Guessing you found the man of your dreams and let us behind? Amazingly no one but the other bi/gay folks here miss you. In fact I hear that even now, occasionally, some readers get together and have a toast to your absence.