The story was nice. It would have been better if the spelling and gramatic errors were corrected. If you cant do it yourself there usually is a gramatic correction routine in most word processors. Use that instead of spellcheck.
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Anonymous03/11/04
I liked it
Unlike the previous poster, I didn't find any egregioius errors in the grammar. What errors there were, I considered minor, and felt they didn't distract too much from a nice story.
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Anonymous03/11/04
I especially enjoyed it.
I too was unaffected by any grammar or spelling problems. In fact, I didn't notice any at all. I especially enjoy stories with realistic, older characters that end happily.
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Anonymous03/12/04
Excellent
An excellent story of deep passion and sexual pleasure.
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Anonymous08/27/04
Safely home
Well done Uncle a most beautiful story, one of the best I've read for a considerable time, if I can add a slight aside. Who is this Pedant? to cast his/her pearls of dubious wisdom upon the Gramatical form of your stories, makes one wonder does it not?"
perhaps he/she would like to pick over the bones of that statement
I shan't say too much about my feminine feelings as to how your story affected me, it would only detract from the general ambiance of the setting of your story, (wish it was me) type of thoughts
Please dont let your deconstructive critics get you down,
Love Jem
T'was a wonderful piece of passion and love. Ignore the comments of some odious others that couldn't write their way out of a bad fantasy. Keep em coming!
English
Bad English gets on my nerves
The story was nice. It would have been better if the spelling and gramatic errors were corrected. If you cant do it yourself there usually is a gramatic correction routine in most word processors. Use that instead of spellcheck.
I liked it
Unlike the previous poster, I didn't find any egregioius errors in the grammar. What errors there were, I considered minor, and felt they didn't distract too much from a nice story.
I especially enjoyed it.
I too was unaffected by any grammar or spelling problems. In fact, I didn't notice any at all. I especially enjoy stories with realistic, older characters that end happily.
Excellent
An excellent story of deep passion and sexual pleasure.
Safely home
Well done Uncle a most beautiful story, one of the best I've read for a considerable time, if I can add a slight aside. Who is this Pedant? to cast his/her pearls of dubious wisdom upon the Gramatical form of your stories, makes one wonder does it not?"
perhaps he/she would like to pick over the bones of that statement
I shan't say too much about my feminine feelings as to how your story affected me, it would only detract from the general ambiance of the setting of your story, (wish it was me) type of thoughts
Please dont let your deconstructive critics get you down,
Love Jem
MMmmm lovely!
T'was a wonderful piece of passion and love. Ignore the comments of some odious others that couldn't write their way out of a bad fantasy. Keep em coming!
Sure it is a good story
I chanced to see this story a wee bit early for St. Patrick's Day, but it is a fine gift on any day. I hope you come back to your writing. Thank You!
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