All Comments on 'Saturday Night School Ch. 04'

Thanks for continuing this saga.

This has become my very favorite story on this site. Keep writing this story please.

Well written and very creative

Read the entire series to date and look forward to more. Well done, ta very much!!!

THog4u

great stuff Jessica, a more romantic evolution of their journey together.. very well written. please continue this series.

I really enjoy your story because there is the mystery that unveils as you read.

Another installment--YEA! This series just gets better and better. Thank you, JTV.

Thoroughly enjoyed it.. Looking out for chapter 5 .. Parts of the story are very reminiscent of my wife and I and our escapades .. We are both exhibitionists, and she also enjoys public nudity 😊 .. Keep it up Ms. Jessica 😘

The characters are so nicely drawn that I can feel for them and hope that all turns out OK for them.

L

Not sure if I can wait 3 months for the next one!

So good! Keep it up.

The suspense is a killer, but the story itself is the best! Can't wait for the next part! :)

Love the story and hope you continue it.

The best story I've read on this site. I feel hooked!

Very well written. You expressed the characters' emotions really well. Looking forward to the next chapter!

This is a very erotic series. I have enjoyed it greatly.

Great writing (maybe the best on this site). You've got me hooked on these two people. Very hot. Please continue.

This is some terrific writing. I am hooked on these two. The relationship you have constructed is very complex and rewarding to read. I have enjoyed these so much. Can't wait for the next installment. Great job!

I love this story, the relationship of Michelle and Charile is a great. Great work, continue, This story makes me CUM (not really)

This is a great series. Very sensual and erotic.

My dear, you're already an accomplished writer, even if you have'nt been published yet. It's been a long time since I read a whole series from start to finish on the same day - and on a working day for that matter.

The characters and character development is superb, the story is believable, and who can't remember those insecurities and self doubts of adolescence?

This is an amazing work of literary beauty.

This story is truly amazing. I've read Chapter 3 a while ago and was really interested to see how that situation would develop, hoping it wouldn't stop there. To my surprise, and delight, I now read Ch 4 and felt a compelling need to express my appreciation and congratulate you on yet another breathtaking story. Thank you for your astonishing work!

I just finished reading SNS 1-4 one right after the other, and I can identify with both Charlie and Michelle. I kept thinking that Michelle WANTS Charlie to push her into more exhibitionist situations, so it was good to see him finally catch on during that train ride. I'm really looking forward to part 5.

Charlie's call to Michelle made me cry. Brent and Harriet's response to Charlie's video of Michelle warmed me inside. The rest of the story turned me on to the fullest. Jessica, you've touched me deeply. Thank you. I eagerly await more chapters in Saturday Night School, and in A Beautiful Day.

Great talent and writing - you've kept a great story going with a mix of intrigue and pathos as well as descriptive writing. I'm hooked!

Where to next?

Beautiful!!

great story hope to see a sequel in the future

Brilliant writing. So captivating. Love your style. More, please!

You have done a wonderful job of getting Charlie and Michelle into each other's thoughts, as well as into some very sticky predicaments. Not to mention how well you kept the sexual escapades interesting without becoming raunchy. (-: I can't wait to see how you move them forward now that Michelle's prom date is about to hear about them. Kudos, and I look forward to your next chapter with bated breath!! :-D

Wow, this has quickly become my favorite story on the site. I'm looking forward to more!

Really enjoying these chapters, you have a terriic style of writing, very erotic.

Hope there is more of the story to come!

One word for ya, MORE!!! PLEASE

Wow this series is been insanely hot! Definitely looking forward to more, especially the more lighthearted fluffy smut moments between Charlie & Michelle ;D

OMG THIS IS LIKE THE BEST STORY I'VE READ SOO FAARRR!! pleaseee tell mee you would continue this storyy??? I can't wih the cliffhanger like this! I really really hope that you would continue and finish this story cause i really love this story and i want to know what happened with charlie and michelle in the end :) good job jessica!

This has been a really hot story, so don't stop now!

Great to see Charlie and Michelle back together again. I was a little depressed after reading Saturday Night School 3, but very pleased with the finish on this one. Good work. Please continue.

Long may this series continue. You have more to tell us about Michelle, and I look forward to another episode. Your writing skills are impressive.

This is one of the best series I have found, thank you. Your characters are awesome, the story is so creative and sexy. There is a lot of depth. I force myself to read them one at a time and not binge, so I can think about what Charley is thinking between encounters. Great writing, great erotica, thanks again. Dane

Please please continue this story! I love it! I totally get Michelle, hopefully I'll find my Charlie one day. :D

Great story so well written.

A real gem!

I love the character development. This is great story telling that could stand on it's own as that; but then the erotica kicks in: just the right amount, in just the right place. Well done.

I am loving this series, and don't know how I missed it when it first time it came out. I will certainly have to take a look at your other stories as well. I hope you keep writing, as I would love to continue to read them.

There are a lot of stories about girls getting naked in places they shouldn't be, and showing themselves to family, friends and total strangers, but very few mange to combine the exhibitionism with the hot sex, and still put the reader thru the ringer wondering what turn the story is going next. Well done, thoroughly enjoying the story.

BTW why are all the stories about a smokin' hot chick, and not some plain Jane that likes to get naked?

Love the writing and story develpment. It is just fantastic. A real joy to read.

Quite possibly the best erotic story I've ever read.

I applaud you, Jessica!! The other complementary comments are right on target as this is one of the BEST written, best organized, erotically charged and balanced story series on Literotica or elsewhere!

I especially agree with Wakanohana; I don't see how I'm going to be happy with how this ends because the ending just CAN'T live up to its beginning or the even BETTER quality of the middle chapters!

Please keep them coming! (And cumming...!)

X-Man

A.K.A. xavierw

Very few series like his keep my attention for very long. Either the plot starts to unravel or the story becomes redundant. This is the exception. You are a very talented writer with a knack for knowing just how much to give us to keep us on the edge. I had o make myself come here and comment because I'm in such a hurry to read he next chapter. Keep it up. Please.

I'm impressed how you develop the story and I still don't know where it is going. I think that's proof of your talent and I hope you get a career in the writing biz.

You had me hooked until now. Subtlety is sexy. Almost getting caught but not being caught is also sexy. Blatant public sex and nudity is against the law, and it made this story now seem unbelievable. You are a good writer and have great character development, but I now can't keep reading this because it crossed over into something that can't be true.

You really are talented! excellent build and story line. You really know how to keep a reader hooked on ! Kudos.

There are books you just don't want to put down, I had intended to read a chapter over lunch, now it's mid afternoon and 4 chapters done! Charlie has aroused the sleeping giant within Michelle and they have in turn kept me aroused with their erotic adventure

THIS IS SO GOOD! sorry i cant help but yell about it. it gives me heartache in THE BEST way, plus its sexy as fuck, and the main characters have enough depth to keep me interested. ahhhh love it

Oooohhhh, these two...what won't they do...and where!!?? Such a tale being spun here...I LOVE IT!! I cannot wait to get to the next chapter...

Cody & Glenn...I see some kinda confrontation upcoming (GEE...YA THINK!!??) This will be good...do Michelle & Charlie finally "come out" as the couple they are...I think Ronni is in for a surprise (a good one...??) Something good will come out of this...

**5** Stars...For The Anticipation, The Hearbeating Anticipation!! And, For Being SSSSOOOO NASTY!! OOOOHHHH...MMMYYYY!!!!

Wonderfully written!! I read the first four stories all in one sitting, and just had to stop to tell you much I'm enjoying them. The sex is fantastic, but it's the story and the characters that have me hooked. You are very, very talented!

The train scene made this chapter very hot. Sexually provocative. Another top notch tale. I loved it.

Hi Jessica – You can turn a simple train ride onto a most erotic event. You wrote it so well that I could see myself riding on that train, watching that hot couple. Loved it!