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cane with shell handle

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by Anonymous

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by Angeline03/07/04

This is very beautiful

lots of food for thought in it. anyway the poem impresses without trying. :)

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by Liar03/07/04

revel in variations

Some people have all the bloody talent. :) This poem goes from careful beauty, to imaginative similies, to geomentry, to word play... And it's done as effortlessly as the best poets out there handle one, maybe two tools of expression at the same time.

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by LeBroz01/24/07

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A bit abstract and cerebral, but how's that new when speaking of Mr. Smith.

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by LeBroz01/24/07

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A bit abstract and cerebral, but how's that new when speaking of Mr. Smith.

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by tazz31709/03/12

TO CAPTURE AN ESSENCE

of a souls knowledge. TK U MLJ LV NV

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