Things that aren´t right in this story: 1st - The boss - How can a man have so little esteem about himself, that have to live with the little joys another man's wife gave him...Even divorced couldn't he found (being still so manly) a woman of his own, marry her and have and create his own children? How could this man never ask his lover to divorce her weak husband and marry him? How could a man with so low ambition for himself be a good boss? 2nd - How could this wife keep her respect and love for her husband with all he let her do and behave with his boss? How didn't she fall in love for his boss and marry him when he wanted her to have his child? 3rd - What did this husband and father explain to his children why their mother was with another man instead of being with her own children? What kind of example these parents gave to their children? 4th - Why the need for Marion stop to have sex with her husband to be sure the child's father was the boss? What about condoms? 5th - What if this new child will born disabled? Who would take care of him/her (a possibility taking into account the ages of the mother and father) in that case? I don't think her husband would want to have that burden upon him...Much less the real father...Too many discrepancies...1*
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Things that aren´t right in this story...
Things that aren´t right in this story: 1st - The boss - How can a man have so little esteem about himself, that have to live with the little joys another man's wife gave him...Even divorced couldn't he found (being still so manly) a woman of his own, marry her and have and create his own children? How could this man never ask his lover to divorce her weak husband and marry him? How could a man with so low ambition for himself be a good boss? 2nd - How could this wife keep her respect and love for her husband with all he let her do and behave with his boss? How didn't she fall in love for his boss and marry him when he wanted her to have his child? 3rd - What did this husband and father explain to his children why their mother was with another man instead of being with her own children? What kind of example these parents gave to their children? 4th - Why the need for Marion stop to have sex with her husband to be sure the child's father was the boss? What about condoms? 5th - What if this new child will born disabled? Who would take care of him/her (a possibility taking into account the ages of the mother and father) in that case? I don't think her husband would want to have that burden upon him...Much less the real father...Too many discrepancies...1*
It's a story, for God's sake!!
The morality police…gotta love 'em! Thanks for a hot story and keep them coming! *****
Morality be damned
What is immoral to you might very well be moral to me and we are both right as long as our actions don't negatively affect other adults.
As to this story. It's decent but oddly told. Should I assume English is a second language? To me it's a 3* story.
Great tale
This happens in life also
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