by Jairzinho
We thought this would be a good story about two loving lesbians, but it is nothing but a story about control over a woman. This is nothing but CHEAP TRASH and it belongs in the round file. If you are going to keep writing this Trash, please use a spellchecker, have someone edit your story for mistakes or use a dictionary if you know how to use one. In the meantime please seek mental theraphy because you certainly need it if this is what you think of women (lesbians). We are bi and have a good life. TA TA
Laura & Lisa, bi sisters, NO VOTE FOR TRASH LIKE THIS.
I realise the spelling is poor and im working on it, but to think that this would be a loving story and you were disappointed that it wasn't makes no sense, surly you read the title, Kelly gets a slave, did that not give it away, most of the series has been about submission and domination, if you were looking for a sweet love story why on earth did you pick my little story. But if you want a sweet loving story there will be a future part od Kelly and Haley along that lines, part 8 or 9 i don't know.
Jairzinho
I love stories of lesbian domination, especially use of a slave as toilet
What does it say about the readers who would give this SHIT anything above zero
I think parts of this story were quite good. I really liked that the characters were really in love and that the domination is just something they're into. I think it was pretty good but the urine stuff made me kinda sick.
Oh C'mon this is some sick & depraved motherfucking shit. Damn. Please the story is enough to make me barf & I'm gonna do just that. Who the fuck wrote this all I got to say is Damn you are one sick & depraved person. Quit the sick & depraved shit & write different stories
put your fucking head up your ass and fart!
That was totally awesome and hot. I love Lesbian D/S and you pulled this off beautifully. Just one thing, women is plural. It think you meant woman.
grrreat story can`t wait for pt6 and the rest hope you post it soon
waiting on ch 6 knowing it will be good. also waiting on you showing what Haley does to Kelly and the how Kelly introduces the librarian into public humiliation sex.
Where the hell is it? I don't want to read 7 until I have read 6.
just a birliant set of stories can`t wait for part 6 and the restcarry on the good work