I simply love the ending, you even included the humour from 1st chapter and upgraded it all to a loving and sex-filled story. Though I wish it had gone on for a long time and we had the opportunity to see the internal working of Dustys feelings I'm more than satisfied with how things turned out in the end.
Anything less than a 5* would be an outrageous insult!
I really enjoyed following Dusty develop from an sexually awkward young man into a gentle, passionate and sensitive lover. I also loved that he was so patient while satisfying Holly's curiosity about sex. Their combined wit, intelligence, and sexual appetites made for a perfect couple. Great ending.
English
A suitably perfect ending
I simply love the ending, you even included the humour from 1st chapter and upgraded it all to a loving and sex-filled story. Though I wish it had gone on for a long time and we had the opportunity to see the internal working of Dustys feelings I'm more than satisfied with how things turned out in the end.
Anything less than a 5* would be an outrageous insult!
Dusty's progress (ch 1-3)
I really enjoyed following Dusty develop from an sexually awkward young man into a gentle, passionate and sensitive lover. I also loved that he was so patient while satisfying Holly's curiosity about sex. Their combined wit, intelligence, and sexual appetites made for a perfect couple. Great ending.
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