This writer ha done a great job of bring the daughter along , And now mom will give them both sex and the three will love each other for years, I love thinking and cumming abut this story. Please keep writing!
to offset the asshole of LIT"s 1 vote. Good story and lots of sex
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Anonymous04/25/16
IT WAS BETTER BEFORE!
This series of stories was an amazing romantic story between how a brother and a sister fell in live and then you had to go and ruin it by making the mother fucking find out and join in and as a result te story has lost all emotion and meaning, it's now just a story of three family members f***king like wild animals. It was way better before.
I certainly do not think thatyou should waste time and effort to be the co-called critic that you think you are. If you do not like the story- just go on. If you have constructive criticism then say so. Just do not be the boring jerk that you portray yourself to be.
As for me the story if great - keep on writing :-).
English
Love this story so far.
This writer ha done a great job of bring the daughter along , And now mom will give them both sex and the three will love each other for years, I love thinking and cumming abut this story. Please keep writing!
love the story
The story is great, I just feel like the mother is butting inn on the love between the brother and sister.
flat
A bit flat and too many errors. Wtf do you writers have against proofreaders?
5
to offset the asshole of LIT"s 1 vote. Good story and lots of sex
IT WAS BETTER BEFORE!
This series of stories was an amazing romantic story between how a brother and a sister fell in live and then you had to go and ruin it by making the mother fucking find out and join in and as a result te story has lost all emotion and meaning, it's now just a story of three family members f***king like wild animals. It was way better before.
Dear annony, who don't you write your own story
and keep om out of it. Thanks for your comment.
Anonymous 05/2016
I certainly do not think thatyou should waste time and effort to be the co-called critic that you think you are. If you do not like the story- just go on. If you have constructive criticism then say so. Just do not be the boring jerk that you portray yourself to be.
As for me the story if great - keep on writing :-).
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