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wow
You're quite talented. You managed to leave me breathless, and they only kissed.
erotica at its best
First rate writing - hot without a single one of the "dirty" words
Fantastic
Takes you out of the ordinary. Great writing. You seem to know people better than most.
its alive!
It's so cool to hear other peoples falling for the life, cold steel and crome but a whole lot more! great story!!
I'm impressed
Just utterly brilliant. Be proud of your work.
FANTASTIC!!!
Thank you for a well-conceived story.
Wow
Anyone can bring fictional genitals together, but this is erotica.
Breathtaking
Another fantastic story by you. Don't stop writing, ever!
Harley's....
This was a wonderful way of really getting to the heart of why so many women LOVE the feel of a Harley. And more so the men who ride them. This was great! Made me remer my first love.
Makes me want to get a big bike.
This is an excellent story. My tastes are usually more hard-core, but this drew me in and held me through the last word. You sketch the characters so vividly and really capture their relationships and interactions. It's a wonderful description of the power and sensuality of a big motorcycle and the man riding it. Her escape from a predictable dull safe life into the romantic unknown is inspiring. I'll be thinking about this story for a long time.
You can write, girl
Lovely story, extremely tersely written, almost haiku all the way through. Sweet sweet sweet. This is craftsmanship.
liked it
it was really great
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