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His Birthday Plaything Pt. 01

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by sandymonroe04/12/16

So hot!

This story is so hot! I hope I can have the next part soon!

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by JesterBoheme04/13/16

I wrote this as a way of sorting out in my own mind what I wanted to do with my girlfriend. We broke up, not because of this or any sexual issue really, but since then I have become a little disheartened and don't know if I should continue the story.

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by Swinglife1305/10/16

Disheartend

Dont let life experiences hold you back, use them as a catylst for your writting. Next chapter due soon, better get started.

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by CallMeBigMike6908/17/16

WOW Great Story

I really like your style of writing. Your development of the players is great. Cant wait to read the next chapter. Keep on writing!

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