All Comments on 'Sometimes I Wonder...'

I wish they meet again in the future and finish..

Good, generally well written story, but you really need to learn to use lay. laid lying etc correctly. You get it wrong nearly every time.

this is a nice story, and realistic. very frustrating ending. It needs to be looked over for grammar.

So good! I'm not disappointed at all with your latest story. You are one of my favorite authors on this site. I could not care less about minor mistakes because the way you bring characters to life in such a limited amount of space is amazing. Please keep up the good work!

I love it. The ending was bittersweet and gripping.

Thnk you/

It's a really good story, I wish the ending left it open for more....

A coming of age story that sounds like it could have happened. Amazing for this site. All too often stories about first timers feature amazing acrobatics and sudden mastery. I could feel the uncertainty and sweetness of the usual first time fumbling with a few drinks and suddenly sprung situation. Even more, the wondering and avoidance after the fact felt so right.

Bravo to the author who is best known for bigger novel sized stories and serials for making a short, sharp fully formed gripping story.

But 5 stars!

loverofFun, I am a lover of your stories and this one is no exception. Such vivid description of college parties and sexual explorations. Hell, I knew I was a lesbian but had to try a guy to see what the hype was about and if I was missing anything. Nope and it didn't sit well with my spirit, my essence. The only Wondering here is when is your next story coming out. Lol Thanks for the good read

In your bio it's nice to see a photo of what Missy kissed. Also longing for a description of the scent on her fingers when Missy had to pull herself away from your delta. If you felt you really had to let her leave that night, all right, yet thousands of people surely wish you hadn't. Please try to find her and see if you can take up where you left off.

That was incredibly sexy. Pity they never ended up hooking up again. Still, that's how life is sometimes. And you always end up wondering what might have been...

Great writing! So hot due to your descriptive writing. 5 starts!!!

Beautifully Written, loved ,the slow moving arousing descriptions, your writing is superb, and such a turn on, I am so hoping you continue as you have the full and complete and exciting ability to write so wonderful, please keep it up, keep us aroused, share that delicious talent...fingers can taste so good!!

The title gave it away that it would be bittersweet.

You tease. That was truly a "stop it; I love it" triumph.

A masterful piece of writing which I really didn't want to end. More......

Sometimes, I wonder what else you might have written if this wasn’t your last posted story…eight years ago. I hope you are well and are merely being coy :)