What a crap and ugly story!.....wasted time reading this trash!
It seems the author has some cuckold issues mixed with gay issues that were transported to this story.
This story lacks of creativity, poor written, nonsense, bad context and low context.
This story is not even hot nor sexy.....it is not enjoyable and wasted time reading all the way through.
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Anonymous10/08/16
Waiting for another chapter
You did good, steviet, don't stop! It will be nice if we see the next chapter in the near future)
Oh my, this cries out for a last chapter. After taking the relationship this far, going through thinking it over, hubby needs to ditch the birth control, arrange a date and assist Edward in the breeding of his wife
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Anonymous10/15/16
Ending seems rushed
Hope this story isn't done as the ending would seem rushed. Very much enjoying this one, very dynamic natural flow. One of the better writers in this category, keep it up.
please continue. I'd love to see a second chapter of The Ambassador and a third of The Neighbours
Good Heavens
Amazing. Can't wait for the next part!!!
Sequel please
Great story, I could see an want to see this story play out a lot longer.
Amazing story!!!!!!!!!!
Go on, please ;)
Continue the Story
So what happens next
Fantastic
Can't wait for the sequel
Excellent
Pls, don't keep us waiting. Post the next chapter.
More Crap
If you're going to do a cuckold story try and make it believable, this is total childish crap. Give up already.
have a bucket of my vomit
cheers nigga fagg
What a crap and ugly story!.....wasted time reading this trash!
It seems the author has some cuckold issues mixed with gay issues that were transported to this story.
This story lacks of creativity, poor written, nonsense, bad context and low context.
This story is not even hot nor sexy.....it is not enjoyable and wasted time reading all the way through.
Waiting for another chapter
You did good, steviet, don't stop! It will be nice if we see the next chapter in the near future)
Well done . . .
. . . a truly loving interracial/cuckold fantasy tale taken to its ultimate conclusion.
Good job.
Needing more
Oh my, this cries out for a last chapter. After taking the relationship this far, going through thinking it over, hubby needs to ditch the birth control, arrange a date and assist Edward in the breeding of his wife
Ending seems rushed
Hope this story isn't done as the ending would seem rushed. Very much enjoying this one, very dynamic natural flow. One of the better writers in this category, keep it up.
Denial
Repressed homosexual fantasy for yucks.
FANTASTIC story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Excellent!!!!!!!!!!
Any chance to get chapter 4? ;-)
Is this really it!?
Can't we have more? I don't like this cliffhanger, and please don't say it's an open ending.
Agreed, please continue!
I can't imagine this ever stopping! Please write more soon!
And thank you!
Cheers!
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS SUPERB STORY
Please, chapter 4 and several more like this.
One of the best on Lit.
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