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by maxioogee03/11/04

Who's telling the story?

You need to settle who is the narrator, deciding between "Joe" and "I". It is easier to read a story if you know who is telling it to you.

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by Anonymous04/08/08

yes :)

Don't agree with the guy complaining. Your story flows, don't worry. It's very good... A pity that you stopped writing... Cheers Yoron

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