All Comments on 'Yes Sir Ch. 01'

by Rose P

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Joseki KoJoseki Koabout 20 years ago
Grin

That was evil :-]

I really bought into that story. I was there and I could see her. The writing was exquisite. I just wish it had been longer and included alot more activity. Can hardly wait for chapter 2.

MastersallMastersallover 19 years ago
GREAT BEGINNING

Excellent beginning.. well written and looking forward to the rest of the tale

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
great

"Remove your shoes. Sit on the floor. Cross your legs and remove them"

Technically you she is being asked to remove her legs, not her shoes. You might want to change that part.

other than that it was a great introduction!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great story, wish there was more

Certainly left me wanting in more ways than one

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Why so young?

Older women are more mature and know exactly what they want

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