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by Anonymous

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by jthserra03/09/04

The rhyme

felt a bit forced here and an apostrophe or two bit you (other's in line 3). I think if you got away from rhyming couplets and went with a less restrictive rhyme scheme, it will feel less forced. I like the roping of the wind and sun, the images there. Overall pretty good. and watch that punctuation... : )

jim : )

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by Annora03/09/04

A lesson in common curtesy

When somebody reads a submission they find things wrong. When they find that perhaps they can lend a helpful hint or two. Be sure you take the same amount of care as you are so happily telling the person what's wrong.

In telling them what's right.Take the effort you use to criticize spend the same time on being complimetary also.

Once again Art your talent excels in imagination...

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by southerncumfort4006/25/04

Wonderful

I loved this poem its very special :)

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