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by jthserra03/09/04

A rapier look

at us today... You surgically carve up society and leave us with a sculpture. "spend some happy", it's there in the mirror. Excellent poem, excellent advice.

jim : )

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by WickedEve01/23/06

damn

This is excellent.

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by LeBroz12/08/06

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A coffee klatch of Elvis dolls
Bemoaning lack of culture on the 7-eleven circuit.

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by duddle14612/11/06

Truth.

A poem that brings out the craziness and morals of the present. A timely Write!

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