I loved the premise, and the buildup to the slug's orgasm was awesome. Would love to hear where you go next with it.
Thanks CoolSide! Really glad you like it. I've got two more parts in mind. One's been published elsewhere but I was never totally happy with it and it's being rewritten. The other needs to be written from word one.
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Such a hot story
I loved the premise, and the buildup to the slug's orgasm was awesome. Would love to hear where you go next with it.
Thanks CoolSide! Really glad you like it. I've got two more parts in mind. One's been published elsewhere but I was never totally happy with it and it's being rewritten. The other needs to be written from word one.
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