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Unlocking the Wife Through Hypnosis

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by Anonymous04/07/16

Not bad

If you don't know the difference between hear and here you don't quite earn your screen name. Quite well done otherwise for this type of story.

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by wordartist04/07/16

Grammar

Sorry about the grammar. I had fun writing this one and got a little to hyped up about publishing it. It has 3 blatantly bad grammar/spelling errors in it. My apologies.

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by Anonymous04/12/16

Can't wait for seconds!

Love it. Please keep going!

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by husaria04/15/16

Very good start

Awesome story so far. Hope you get her into being a pet of another woman hes doing.

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