Most Daddy/Daughter taboo authors have their late adolescent characters thinking like adult women - or even like men. They completely ignore the capricious nature of the adolescent female mind/emotions. Kelsey is that seething cauldron of emotions, hormones and unpremeditated action that so many teens manifest.
Great job!
Rapierwit24601 made an excellent point. Also, I usually don't enjoy shorter stories, the lack of build up can make them almost generic, but this was soooooo hot. Kuddos & THANK YOU. Looking forward to reading more from you ;)
I admire the fact that her body is still growing and you gave that same treatment to her mind. Too often authors act like at 18 we all have an adult brain lol
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Lol DUH DAUGHTER THIS IS REALISTICALLY HOW A DAD TALKS DUHHHHH
yes.
Yes it is realistic.
Like it
Worked for me!!
More please
Very hot. ..please continue
You nailed something so many others miss
Most Daddy/Daughter taboo authors have their late adolescent characters thinking like adult women - or even like men. They completely ignore the capricious nature of the adolescent female mind/emotions. Kelsey is that seething cauldron of emotions, hormones and unpremeditated action that so many teens manifest.
Great job!
Fantastic writing!! Can't wait to read more
Very good
Very good Hope to read more from you in the future
mmmmm...
Rapierwit24601 made an excellent point. Also, I usually don't enjoy shorter stories, the lack of build up can make them almost generic, but this was soooooo hot. Kuddos & THANK YOU. Looking forward to reading more from you ;)
Bravo
I admire the fact that her body is still growing and you gave that same treatment to her mind. Too often authors act like at 18 we all have an adult brain lol
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