All Comments on 'Seducing The Paperboy'

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takerfan4takerfan4about 20 years ago
Great Stuff!

Very well written, the story was done well and had really good pacing. A couple of areas where a comma could have been used to help the transitions. Sometimes, I would have to go back and re-read the sentence to make sure it was right. Other than that, excellent story. Makes me wish I had been a paperboy!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Reminds me of when I was a paperboy!

You have the nack for writting erotic stories that are nicely done and not gross. I look forward to reading more of your works. By the way...It reminded me of my younger days as a neighborhood paperboy. There are women who do just what you have written about. I wonder now if your story is based on an actual event. Well, Keep your paperboys happy pretty lady!

fathertime08fathertime08over 11 years ago
Great Story

My wife is becoming attracted to younger men. She loved this story.

JohnnieBoxxJohnnieBoxxalmost 7 years ago

Very good story..... My kind of woman :-)

Familyluv2114uFamilyluv2114uabout 6 years ago
Amazingly written

I love stories where a mature woman takes control of an 'innocent' young boy😉

Congrats are in order for this short but delicious story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Learn to write properly

You change tense halfway through a paragraph.

One second past then present and straight back to past.

It doesn't make good reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
my real experience

At age 13, my paper route was daily PM and Sunday AM. The last customer was a nurse who had just got off work and who invited me in for cocoa while she paid me. I went to the bathroom and as leaving spotted her washed stockings and undies hanging to dry. As I fondled them, a deep voice behind said "Do you like my undies Thomas?". Stunned, I said nothing, but she said "Try some on". My hard cock popped out as she removed my drawers. "You're just a boy, but that belongs to a man. I want that. Taking me into her bedroom, she lay on the bed on her back and motioned for me to get in between her legs. She guided my cock to her pussy and wiggled and pushed me until I was balls deep in her. Then, with her hands controlling my motion, she guided my deep full length thrusting in her with my balls bouncing on her pussy. "Slow down, slow down" she said. I did, but soon culminated in a thunderous orgasm. "Don't pull out" she demanded. But soon, I was hard again. "Nice and slow now. I'll adjust the speed" she said. This time, I lasted a lot longer and she and I climaxed together. It became a regular Sunday event.ki

26thNC26thNCabout 2 years ago

Old cow chasing young meat story certainly inspired some anonymous bitches to tell their lies.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Easy to see why this story is so highly rated. 5 stars.

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