All Comments on 'Surrounded Ch. 04'

multiple orgasm right here

Damn. The back-and-forth between the innocent wife and the goddess Aisha is worthy of a Netflix original series. Maybe try your hand at Hollywood.

A little artistic license, it seems, though - how the hell do these pregnant women stay so damn horny? My wife has barely touched me since we found out.

Best writer on this site, and always proving the adage "good writing leaves them wanting more!" I definitely would like to read about how things went with the flower lady and how things end up going with the mother. If I might make a suggestion with respect to the mother - we've seen now how Matt has gone from faithful husband to depraved lust, and how he's trying to achieve "balance." I think the next installment should have him corrupting the mother and losing that balance. Seems like the natural arc of the story.

Keep writing - would gladly chip in if you had a Patreon.

Loving it all so far. The Greek chrous of shameless, irresistible sluts talking smack while he performs half hearted marital relations. So bad. So good.

Once again you deliver with another fantastic story. I love all your stories and I really can't wait to read what you write next. I do hope you continue this story though as it just keeps getting better with the more women you involve and your tie in with Church on State was great. Keep up the great work!

You are the best writer!

I hate seeing a door mat and poor amanda is exactly that without knowing i hope that in some part of this story it shows amanda starting a physical and emotional affair woth another man and matt finding out. Make the story back fire on him. Also hope she gets pregnant with the other guys baby aswell because you can tell matt really loves his wife and doesnt want to leave her but also enjoys having his 3 whores on the side. I want to see how he will react when or if he finds out that he isnt the only man in amandas life physically or emotionally

Been looking forward to the Aisha chapter since the start of the story. Got to say, it lived up to expectations. Really hoping he takes up Mel's offer. Don't think you have done an Asian main girl before.

Nice to seed the nods to your other stories. I like the shared universe you're building.

I really liked it alot.just as good as your other stories,the only complaint I had was I would have liked to see things go a bit farther with Mel.

Not feeling Aisha. The non-stop hoodrat vernacular was like pin steadily jabbing at the libido. The author has a clear vision and I respect that. Gritty, grimy sex with smack talking, grasping lush woman trumps any variant of carnal relations with those freaking size zero , mealy mouthed , politically correct skinny human clothes hangers. Amen.

But the other sluts knew how to lay back, pretend to play it cool and yet entice the narrator closer and closer until all pretenses were dropped and its 'ho time'.

Loved the interior monologues of both narrator and Amanda. The supporting characters in terms of promising women who haven't been tapped yet was rife with potential was very strong. 5 star story in terms of when Aisha was wasn't in scene.

Other then her , the story totally rocked.

I'm down with sweet chocolate but make mine Pam Grier with that dusky, serpentine allure. Those Black Chyna types can keep on , keeping on. Someone's buying into what their selling. But not me. Not ever.

Loved the new story! Mr.RandyWatson, as for your comment, every woman is different & every pregnancy is different. When I was pregnant with my first, I was so horny I'd call my husband home from work on a daily basis. But with my second I didn't want him anywhere near me (much to his disappointment). Maybe it's hormones or something. Don't take it personally, nothing you did or didn't do. Just remind yourself that you get a gorgeous, healthy baby when it's over.

Yes! I lov this series. I hope you'll continue this. You're one of my fav. author here. Thanks man.

By far you're my favorite Literotica author. You've nailed this cheating genre down, and I'm not sure I've ever made it to the end of one of your stories without finding an orgasm first. This one lasted me two orgasms. I love the build up of reluctance, trying to abstain only to give into sweet, mind adding bliss.

I'm so thankful for your new contribution to your list of stories.

Every time when I see an update for TheTalkMan I am never disappointed, am glad you could write again and hope you can continue to do so.

Your stories are by far the best on this site. But lately I am missing the evil, the humiliazion and the confrontation of mistress and wife.

Pls keep up the great work!

Your writing is fabulous, I really love your stories

I am big tittle and great ass chick. Fortunately or unfortunately I bagged my stud early in life and he has been mine ever since. If not I defo would have done what the bitches in your stories do and stolen the hunk husband of some mousy female. Your stories are super. Please keep writing.

I want to know if Matt fucks his mother in law.

Why are all your males so weak?

Part 5?!

I really like this series and hope u do another part of it I´d like to see he gets not only his MIL, but some more Women even if they are just on off things for him but he tells them that. Maybe like the yo9ung interim in his Workplace or some other hot Woman that spices things up

At the end of Part 4, I was half-expecting to see Katie and Michelle pretending to be a Lez couple ... The two nymphos seem to get along rather well and for Matt it would allow him to pay only for one house and to have more excuses to see them and his kids... you know: "Amanda, those poor fatherless children need a father figure..." It will also allow Michelle to join family events, such as the thanksgiving dinner.

Really hope your next story is part 5 of this series. I think this is your only unfinished project if I'm not mistaken. Then again, you could continue with the underground story of the Evil Witches vs the Church; either way really hope you update soon.

When should we expect the next chapter in this story?

Brilliant,unputdownable eroticism!!!

I loved this series but it's surely Not the end right?! We need to find out what happens when the babies are born & the wife can't NEVER figure this out right?!! Or catch them or.......SOMETHING.......!! She's a lawyer for goodness sakes!!!! Are they not supposed to be good at finding the deceit in cases? PLEASE finish this story!

Part 5??

Well I liked it with the best friend and perhaps the sister. But the mother no way. They're just way old to be fucking their daughter's husbands. No matter how they take care of themselves they will still be old and tits gets sagged. Hardly a thing to fantasise about but I understand its a thing for some people. And 3 sluts are too many to handle for a permanent basis. The impossibility of the situation kind of destroy the illusion

else can one ask for but more please. There is not enough reverse interracial stories like this one. Maybe a couple more calmer scenes where characters could enjoy each others company, kiss and discuss things other than cheating/sex. What do those dominant woman do when not having sex? When was the last time he has taken one of the other girls on a date, went to the gym with them or even taken a vacation in an exotic place where no one would know them?

How about a sci-fi story?

- For example about a female terminator sent back in time to corrupt a resistance memeber instead of killing him.

- A Dredd adaptation where a rookie Judge is turned crocked by a female gang leader.

Something dystopian?

- A Mad Max world, but with male population been in the minority.

Fantasy.

- With one of the female villains going after the prince charming.

So are we ever going to get a continuation where Matthew slams his fat cock in his mother in law and wife finds out

Come on it's been years when are you going to release the next ch?