All Comments on 'Private, Don't Look Ch. 08'

Love love love it. . Would love to try this.

Way to ruin this story by adding joe to the mix. I was hoping this would have ended quickly but if joe is going to be an on going thing then im done with what started out as a great tale about three people NOT four.

second guy ruined it, I'm out

isn't 3 a prime number and lucky one? Seems that 75% of us prefer the 3-some, but I need to continue reading past #7.

Will Joe let it slip to another buddy and then there is 5? HOPE NOT!

Dorn it! You just killed a somewhat perfectly balanced relationship. And just had to pour Lust and "californication" in the mix.. That's sad.. well, that's it for me.. bb.

Otherwise nice written..

Once you added another male to the mix you killed it for me, you, like a lot of authors here you got too greedy and went the step most of us hate. You guys never get it.

You went from 5/5 to 1/5 literally overnight.

Oh well.