All Comments on 'House Sitting Ch. 02'

Perfect for starting the day :D

Wish u can add more lengthy chapters please

u r so good in narration

thanks for sharing

The story is great and well written. The problem is that they are too short to jerk off to. Just as you get a good rhythm going touching yourself, the chapter ends. Here's hoping that chapter three is longer than one page.

But, as has already been noted, your instalments are too short.

Thanks for the feedback so far. I'll go for a longer chapter three! :)

Fun story, yet anal sex needs a condom and/or some more conversation about safety for the newly sexually active fellow. I point this out since the 1st edition did an ok job covering a little chat about avoiding sexually transmitted infections and pregnancy, even though being a virgin doesn't mean this fellow is STI free...

.especially if he has been sexually active outside of penetration. Nice writing, though.

This is a great story. Please continue, there's a ton of potential!

You could make this easily a two pager or so as to kinda let us get into it and set the mood for the finish instead of a wham bam I gotta go kind of story.! Make it a story instead of a 'note' and we can really get into it and kinda remember the 'good ole days'..!**** Got another "5" though for you.^^

and why should we care?

This is great writing! Your reader needs to imagine, right? So, the talk is fantastic, a few more details, for example, the window seen the great but the dishwasher is kind of random.

Great potential

yes I was house sitting for a older couple they were gone for a month and all I had to do was just keep the place clean and tidy I told them I will as they left the lady came over and told me if I would throw her laundry in the washer I said yes miss then she show me were it was she told me leave the panties and bras I do them when I get home I told in a month look I done laundry before what so hard to wash panties and bras she said fine but wash them by hand then she left well after two weeks I start to do her laundry then I heard the door open and shut hard I walk out to see who was there I forgot that I had a bra over my shoulder when I walk in the living room and there was the lady I ask her what happen I just left that bum for good then she look at me and laugh well I seen it all now my friend got my bra on its to bad you should take your shirt off first well I went back and finish the wash and washing out her panties and bra when she came in I thought I told you to take your shirt off now I just toke it off and she toke one of her bras and hook it on me there that look better now you wear that bra and maybe I let you put on a shirt no I think a blouse would be a lot nice well after awhile she came back and said are you done now my dear I said yes miss all but some panties I forgot these one as I hold them up she said have you ever wore girl panties I said no she ask would you like too try a pair on I said I do not know she told me look its just us two let me dress you as a girl for to-day and it will be fun I said yes lets do it make me your little girl well after that day and for the next three weeks I was dress as her little girl then one night her husband came home and when he walk in he saw two women he ask his wife who was the lovey girl well dear a friend of mine then they went to the bedroom after awhile she came out I ask is every thing all right yes he going to stray the night so I will sleep with you I said what look all he know you are a girl so I got you a nightie to wear to bed when I saw the nightie it was a sexy black see thought nightie I put it on and we craw into bed it was late in the night when he came into are room as I lay there he went over to his wife he thought but it was me he kiss me please dear I am really sorry just then he kiss me as he did I kiss him back just then his wife woke up and look at us keep going dear kiss him again dear feel here breasts that it do my husband want to suck her tits he just nod he pull my nightie down and put his lips on my breasts and suck I do knot know why I told him yes that feel good his wife said to me put your hand on his cock i did as told soon I was sucking his cock and the next thing I knew I was begging him to make me his bitch and that how I become a couple bitch

This could not be the same Sandra Stinson from Ottawa. Through her cousin Tammy, she asked me to go out with her. We were both 16. She was extremely shy, so shy she wouldn't talk directly to me, always through her cousin. Except the first time we were alone. The first words that she spoke directly to me were, Put It In Me! Well I was in balls deep quicker than a jack rabbit. We fucked & fucked for several hours. She was my first. I will never forget her. I found Tammy online, but she was no help to find Sandra. All she would talk about was her brother passing away from cancer. I suspect that she had been doing her brother.

The names are all fiction here.

Loose the pants?