All Comments on 'Circle7 Ch. 01'

by TheIrishTux

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Wow! This was not what I was expecting! I'm not one for 'non-human' and thought it wouldn't be for me but its a really great story. I definitely think you should continue. Enthralling start to what should be an enticing saga. And great writing, as usual :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Interesting start

Luke comes off a little douchey though

PsychocandyPsychocandyabout 8 years ago
Amazing!

I love your writing style! I think you have such a great flow here, and I'm really excited to see where this goes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
It's good

This is actually a really good piece. well put together and lacking the usual broken English and grammar that stories on this site normally have. I was pleasantly surprised.

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