by TheIrishTux
Wow! This was not what I was expecting! I'm not one for 'non-human' and thought it wouldn't be for me but its a really great story. I definitely think you should continue. Enthralling start to what should be an enticing saga. And great writing, as usual :)
I love your writing style! I think you have such a great flow here, and I'm really excited to see where this goes.
This is actually a really good piece. well put together and lacking the usual broken English and grammar that stories on this site normally have. I was pleasantly surprised.