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Nicely done
With simplicity and well chosen words
I wish it was longer
thank you
Cool reflections
I like it. What else can I say? No, I just like it. :)
perhaps should be multiplicity
for some reason the cliches fit
like it is part of the whole point
I almost want to say "ouch"
you know what they say about truth
So true!
This is great and simple. I love it! (and it's soclean!)
Brilliantly worded!
The poem is enriched by the images each line immediately produces through the use of cliches. Each word, each line contributes to the overall meaning of the poem. I particularly like the line "warp speed through a cyber brothel." Great poem!
great write
thanks for the vote and I enjoyed visiting your site..this was my favorite...smiles/blue
When Thank You Isn't Enough
Kisses Sandy. And much love. This poet is honoured to be your subject...perhaps nude modelling follows? d.s.
perfect
Observation is the key to good poetry. You have done it.
black hole eh?
i'm prob in trouble then.
writing is an addiction..
anyhow i loved the way you brought the point across
i won't say ouch though..i have a devilish smile happening.
anyhow..ty for your visit and your words..they are appreciated, xo fawnie
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Very nice, enjoyed surfing through the black hole.
~~
A black hole?
Oh no, we're stuck at Lit
And have been sucked in
With creativity forever hidden.
charting
Each poet pulls something from within and pours it out via the keyboard hoping his inspiration and natural abilities will be enough.
Oh what a 'web' we weave... here on Literotica,,
spurred on by the diehard 'Anonymous'
Oh what a 'web' we weave... here on Literotica,,
spurred on by the diehard 'Anonymous'
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