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A Poet's Singularity

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by Anonymous

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by Tathagata03/09/04

Nicely done

With simplicity and well chosen words
I wish it was longer
thank you

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by Liar03/09/04

Cool reflections

I like it. What else can I say? No, I just like it. :)

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by SeattleRain03/09/04

perhaps should be multiplicity

for some reason the cliches fit
like it is part of the whole point
I almost want to say "ouch"
you know what they say about truth

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by Syndra Lynn03/10/04

So true!

This is great and simple. I love it! (and it's so??clean!)

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by Vampiric_Mirage03/31/04

Brilliantly worded!

The poem is enriched by the images each line immediately produces through the use of cliches. Each word, each line contributes to the overall meaning of the poem. I particularly like the line "warp speed through a cyber brothel." Great poem!

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by bluerains04/02/04

great write

thanks for the vote and I enjoyed visiting your site..this was my favorite...smiles/blue

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by Anonymous04/07/04

When Thank You Isn't Enough

Kisses Sandy. And much love. This poet is honoured to be your subject...perhaps nude modelling follows? d.s.

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by quietpoly05/09/04

perfect

Observation is the key to good poetry. You have done it.

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by fawnie06/03/04

black hole eh?

i'm prob in trouble then.
writing is an addiction..
anyhow i loved the way you brought the point across
i won't say ouch though..i have a devilish smile happening.
anyhow..ty for your visit and your words..they are appreciated, xo fawnie

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by Bill Dada09/25/05

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Very nice, enjoyed surfing through the black hole.

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by LeBroz12/15/06

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A black hole?





Oh no, we're stuck at Lit
And have been sucked in
With creativity forever hidden.

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by duddle14601/01/07

charting

Each poet pulls something from within and pours it out via the keyboard hoping his inspiration and natural abilities will be enough.

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by Amyfriend01/30/07

Oh what a 'web' we weave... here on Literotica,,

spurred on by the diehard 'Anonymous'

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by Amyfriend01/30/07

Oh what a 'web' we weave... here on Literotica,,

spurred on by the diehard 'Anonymous'

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