All Comments on 'Have Faith'

Stupid and a waste of time.

1*

I had faith that this wouldnt be total crap...I was wrong.

we need some pun police up in here

1* must be eviltwins other half. Bth sickos posted today.

The beginning was promising, describing a couple that could belong to a comic book, then showed up another comic character (the deacon), but soon all the comic ingredients were lost and this become a boring and long description of no more comic persons, but like this was inside a asylum for mentally disable people!!! And become a bad and tasteless work with no meaning...A promising beginning turned into a garbage heap...What a waste!!!!! 1*

I love the intertwining of religious guilt with dirty cuckolding sex. So filthy and delightful. I came in my pants reading it!!!

Did the looney bin turn it's patients loose in the computer room last night? Three nut bags in a row.

good story, next time make the cuck a fucking muslim: I dare you!!! chop, chop!

muslin!!!!

And the writing and dialogue were just terrible. Nothing fun or entertaining here.

1 star.

Sick? yes. Wrong? yes. Fun? no way in hell. 1*

for effort and content and to help offset the asshole of LIT' 1 vote

for effort and content and to help offset the asshole of LIT' 1 vote

VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT FAT DUMB WHORE VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON!

BS FROM THE GET GO STOP WRITING THIS CRAP

This is without a doubt THE NUMBER ONE WORST CUCKOLDING STORY I have ever read. Nothing else comes close.

You say you crave comments. Then this. Faith loves humiliating Christian. Wow. Here come the comments.

Stories like this one always focus on the here and now because the future for 99% of such relationships is one of hurting and pain, either emotional or physical or both. Then there are the ones where someone goes too far and someone dies. I know many people see this kind of story as a fun fantasy, but sometimes people forget that some fantasies should stay fantasies and never intrude on the real world. Curse me for being the BTB asshole that I am, but I've seen first hand how letting a fantasy become real can lead to destroyed lives. And it's my inability to totally separate real life from the story that keeps me limited in which stories appeal to me.

very well said

Couldn't even begin to finish it. Beyond stupid!

because, quite honestly, this was not well written at all. So many mistakes! But I know there are those that would like to experience what Christian did! They get off on the humiliation and the abusive behavior of Faith. I will not and cannot condemn that. To each his own!

How many readers understood the hypocrisy lampooned here. "Christian", "Faith", "the deacon", how these supposedly religious characters are exposed as hypocrites! I thought that was delightful. However, most of the commenters missed that and exposed their own ignorance and prejudice in their comments. Their comments make clear to me why that bigoted hate monger from New York has won so many delegates to the convention! I cry for the future of our country!

humiliation, degradation, water sports, domination,.

the acts depicted belong in Fetish and BDSM.

want a comment?

have the courtesy to post the true nature of a story in the beginning.

There is no love here, only humiliation and degradation.

Why the fuck are these two together?

She's a bitch and he's a wimpy dumb-ass.

1*

fag cuck shit.

Finally someone gets it. It's a spoof, or as Legsfeettoes put it, a lampoon on religion. It's not supposed to be a true story. How could anyone try to relate this crap to real life. God forbid someone got turned on by this, and then hates this story because of what turned them on. Oh wait, think that might be the point of the story.

I give it 2 stars for writing, and 4 stars for cleverness.

to offset the Asshole of Lit vastiesmith.

Sorry, but even as a "lampoon" it is lame.

If you really want to denegrate religion, why don't you just come out and do it? It gets pretty tiring when "nonbelievers" who hide behind their desire for communism take to libeling those who see something more in life than the "commoner without conscience".

Use your gift of storytelling to tell something worthwhile, rather than this crap.

You eat a bullet. The end.

....yet another crappy cuck story. You don't get points for originality, this farce has been done. You don't get points for quality writing as its so full of issues I prefer to let you stew in your own juice. And you don't get points for storytelling, because you don't make any character like able or relatable.

The poor cuck is so bound up in his obedience, we can only wonder why he isn't already dead by suicide. And wifey is so arrogant and overbearing her adultery with the overtly and stupidly stereotypical bull "deacon" is a let down.

Nope, total crap....100% worthless. I should have stopped, but like many train wrecks, once begun, it was impossible to turn away in sorrow and horror.

But I won't darken your doorway again.

No thank you.

cuck shit

You did preface the story with a warning lol! Nice dirty story, I loved it!

I love the way you wove the cuckolding, humiliation and toilet duties into the story. hope yu have other stories to follow.

I was curious and intrigued by the discussion on the AH thread. Well done story, great build-up and suspense, love the pun in the title! LW tales are not my cup of tea, but the premise and the execution were great. And the comments are a trip on their own - beyond bizarre that people will keep reading something they hate, then punish the author for it. Takes all kinds...

Fucking rubbish the biggest load of bollocks for a long time. No more please.

WTF?! 3 really fucked up people populate this disgusting display of total disrespect!

First,Wimpy the Cuck needs to take some measure of revenge. On the deacon's next visit he drugs his drink

.The rev passes out while Wimpy is bindfolding his wife with the scarf. He tells her the deacon has a sexy surprise for her and to open her mouth wide. Wimpy guides the deacon's cock into her mouth,piece by bloody piece and forces her to swallow. He pisses in her mouth so she can wash it down.

Wimpy crams a stick of dynamite up her ass,lights the fuse and leaves the room.

Following the loud explosion,he re-enters the room to see what's left of his degrading,disrespectful wife splattered all over the room. He proceeds to take a loaded glock,shove it deep in his mouth,and end this fucking story,once and for all.

Sorry but no sequel!

Only real brain sick perverted people can write such a crap!!!

No this story sucked piss

thank you very much, I know you like it so fantasyxy

not good but I have to smile at this one like a 2

but this one beats them all. Especially the author.

another cocksucking WIMP posting DUMB cuck SHIT.

Beyond sick.

Vomit inducing.

Dumb story, pathetic

Be kellene tiltani az ilyen és ehhez hasonló írásokat ,ami keresztényi védjegy alatt iródott! Undorító!!!

A fan of your writing usually, but not of this particular story. Pretty damn bad in all areas.

I enjoyed that story, gotta say. Christian's mental reactions had a level of believability and the whole thing was just wacky enough to be fun.

I also like it when characters figure out what works for them, and it's not what they were expecting.

(First time on this site, wondering why so many of the commentators sound totally nuts. Is there some type of self-loathing/lashing-out dynamic going on?)

Christian is gonna need therapy...

Why can't you sick fucks pick on Muslims? Why pervert the Christian heritage with you vile "stories"? And what real man would put up with this shit?

Too much, and too over the top, hatred for me!

Yo drivel is worse than yo liking farted cum from latrine walls, mon

... about the popularity of this story. Mixing conservative Christianity with cuckold sex is bound to stir up a lot of controversy. It makes people feel conflicted. It brings out the worst in some. A crowd of anonymous haters against a few good people writing a critique of the story on its own merit.

My thoughts on the story: It is all good if this kink and cuckold fetish helps a couple to discover new pleasure in sex. Kudos to a man who learns that it is better to lick pussy than to expect a blow job. As Jesus would say: Giving is better than receiving.

If that's fucking church you can fucking keep it

Ennél jobb írásokat is lehetne ,mint egy sz@r felszarvazott nulla értékűt!

Ez nálam egy csillag,de valójában nulla!!!

Quite disgusting, since you made hubby a pathetic cuck.

A cuck story? Put a camera in the room and sue that church. And toss the wife out.

Now I get it, asshole writers deliver stories to other asholes, and the commenters follow like the ducks and assholes they are.

Very fun story.

As always, the anony-mouses come out in swarms to express their scorn. Because they're ashamed of having cum while they read it.