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French Fry Heaven

byAri Fleming©
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by Don Grampa03/13/04

GREAT STORY!

This is a funny fun story with a great twist at the end. I hope this is just the first of many stories that will flow from the pen of this author. Thanks for a great read!

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by Anonymous03/13/04

Nicely presented

Well done.
Good Story.
Great ending.

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by 03/14/04

fun

enjoyed the story, would like to know what happens next..

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by Anonymous03/19/04

Nicely told

Well-written, funny, and smart. One of the best I've seen here.

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by nighthawk2220407/14/04

Tale of the Great Escape

This is a great story. I loved the many twists on the old genie tale, even down to letting Jeanie finally escape from the lamp.. Where can I find her now? nighthawk22204@hotmail.com

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by Anonymous10/28/07

Very Nice

It was just grand, however odd (due to names of people I know, not your writing.)

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by AdonisXxX11/01/15

Bwahahahahaha

Idiot..

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