Wish Box

Enjoyed this.
Write some more.

Great story

Write some more! I want to see where this goes.

Great Start

Can't wait to see what his Next wish is. and to see what else he comes up with. It would be a Nice way to go to the College of your choice.

Good story .

Not bad for your first mind control story ,lets see where you go with it .Keep writing and I'll keep reading . Good job .

Great star

This was a great start. The story has a lot of potential. I look forward to many more chapters.

Encore! Encore!

Good story. Seems like Treys mom was just putting out to save her precious son and wasn't really that into it with our lucky guy. Perhaps further messages in the 'magic box' will make her our lucky guy's sex slave. Also the stepmom needs to be shown her place (on the end of her stepson's cock!). Let's see some more chapters huh? Don't be a one hit wonder like so many of the Lit authors. Good story keep it up!

Good start

It was a good start and i hope that there will be more of it! Hope we don't have to wait to long for more

More please!

Was great. looking for more.

if

when looking at the outside of the box "I took out the box and examined it, turning and looking for marks or anything. It didn't look plastic and I couldn't see any cuts or markings or anything" the first night.
and on the second "even after having stared at it for more than an hour, I hadn't been able to find so much as a crack in it."
how did he put the paper/note inside?

lose: can't find. you had it but don't know where it is. as in you lost it.
loose: opposite of tight. you didn't tie it on tight enough, it came loose and fell off.

Excellent.

I like the idea that the box only works overnight - adds a bit more drama than the many stories where guys get their wishes answered immediately. I hope you continue,

So far so good

I like the development so far. How will he act next? I hope he does not go off the deep end with extreme wishes too far into the series.

We always like to see the abused geek gain some form of retributive justice....

....and we hope he is not just a repressed troglodyte, like the unrepressed troglodyte jerks that abused him.
A code hero would be good in this story.
One can only hope.
Thank you.

xb

zxd

Nice work

Good sex.

A wonderful story

I read all parts of this story some time ago, but never forgot it, so here I'm back again. Outside of a few simple errors, probably typing errors, this is a very good story. It is great how you took your time in building up the story, and didn't simply rush into the sex part. To me, it is these details that is what turns a good story into a great one. You are a very good writer with a great imagination, so I hope you keep writing and looking for ways to improve. You do have a lot of natural talent. Keep up the good work. Now I'm off the read the rest of this tale once again.

Just wondering

I know this sounds petty, but why is it none of these self-centered characters ever ask for the cure to Cancer, Alzheimers, etc? I know, its just a story, just wanted to chime in with that. Great story, love it actually.