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Bossing the Boss Ch. 05

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/13/04

Too Brief!

I like the plot of your stories, but they're altogether too short and lacking really erotic description. There is thus little erotic tension, which they easily could have.

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by Anonymous03/13/04

Lacking

I really enjoy the story but find that the length of the chapters to be lacking - they're just to short. Maybe if you were to ombine two at once it would be better

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by Anonymous03/14/04

please, we are begging

just like the 'boss' is.....obviously from the comments you have plenty of readers (like me) who check daily to see what is going to happen next....i really enjoy reading this and it would be a real turn on to have more descriptive sex scenes, or longer begging/teasing scenes???
How about it?

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by Anonymous03/15/04

Bravo!

More public humiliation!

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by Anonymous03/15/04

TOO SHORT!

You need to have more meat to the stories. Way too short
and unsatsifying.

It would be interesting to see Jodi find out and be able
to blackmail both Tom and Suzanne.

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by Anonymous03/25/04

I'm just hoping

that Jodi will still be his friend after learning of his "Fun with the Boss", and that they might continue whatever relationship -together- "WITH" Suzanne! Sure hope they don't end up double-teaming Tom with some sour twist.
WoW, what DO you have in store for us now?
What a tightrope this next chapter will be!
Thanks again for a great storyline; my hubby and me are "role-playing" this story as it continues.
(Is it MY turn now?)
Yippee

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by Fourscore03/26/04

Glad you enjoyed it

Dear Anonymous,
Thanks for your kind comments. That is the highest praise I have received. Please e-mail me and tell me more about your role playing and what you would like to see in future chapters.

Fourscore

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by Anonymous05/15/04

You're making me purrrr

oh man oh man oh man, you have me purring and I still have a few chapters to go.

You have me squirming almost as much as she was, and all I want now is to have the relief that he finally granted her.

Purrrrrr sorry kitty's don't bark so my purrrrr will have to do :P

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