Mexican-Sioux Lesbian Couple Ch. 01

Seriously.......

shit

5

to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote I'm sure he gave you!

TO BE CONTINUED...

Please, please, DON'T!

Some of the worst pseudo-lez writing of all time. In fact, some of the worst [i]writing[/i] of all time.

If you dont like it...

If you dont like a story, which is understandable, to each his/her tastes, either make a constructive non hatefull comment about why so that writter can improve on it, or dont bother at all. All those "shit" "worst story ever" without constructive comments are making me feel sorry for your wasted brain.

I found the story to be ok, not something incredible, nor unseen. The main bad thing I find it is that we have difficulties relating to the characters, as they dont have struggles in their feelings, nor a long enough build up about who they are

Shit

I'm dripping wet

ok

to all you people, I though this story was well written, I think the author did a very good job with this and I hope to read more later on, I know you can not please all the people all the time, if you do not like it do not read it

It's hard drumming up any sympathy for this character and really this story. We're now calling breasts or titts - knockers? Hmm, it's not my cup of tea, but I wish you well.

A good start

Nothing annoys me more than people who make comments about a story simply because it's not their cup of tea. so breasts are knockers We are talking about a woman from the rough side of the tracks and so I accept this title. As for the story - it was well constructed and very well told. Please do continue but please don't Put To Be Continued at the end of the chapter. It would be better to inform us at the beginning that this is the first part of a longer story.

Otherwise well done it was hot

It was okay.

The sex scene could have been more descriptive but other than that it was alright.