Reservoir of Power Ch. 01

Awesome

I liked the story it has a good amount of detail without being too in depth so as to keep the reader entertained

YES!!!

Love it I'm waiting

Excellent and Intriguing Beginning

Made me want to know what comes next just the way good writing should. Thank you for sharing.

Nthusiastic

Ylva seems like a good person but her pushiness definitely could get on a person's nerves. Lochlain is too nice of a guy to tell her to back off a bit.

That's .......not bad!!!!

Enjoyed that. Keep on going.

Looking forward to finding out what the non-human element is.

I agree with shyintx. ^^

Very Good Start

Has lots of potential!

Can't even figure out what this is about

I stopped reading because there's no description on what this is about anywhere, I can't even figure out why this is in the nonhuman category, and no one reads a book without reading the description first because 9 times out of 10 it ends up being a waste of time.

Ripper

Ripper start and we are bearly into it.

Omg

I LOVE the characters I'm so excited for the rest of the story that I keep checking every day!!!! ❤️

Thank you and welcome...

Thanks to all of you who have voted or left comments.

This tale will be novel length and released every 3 weeks or so. Never fear, it will be finished; indeed most of it is already written and undergoing revisions. My pattern will probably match the release pattern of Artiface (my previous novel here if you are a new reader).

Yes, this is a non-human story and I'm hoping that the uncertainty of who and how makes for some fun for y'all.

As always... Thank you for reading and making an author very happy!

Loved this!

Great start...lots of places to go with this...now I am anxiously waiting for the next chapter! Keep 'em coming!

Just about the only thing that constantly tugged my attention...

Was the often-conspicuous *lack* of contractions.

Other than that, I'm hooked.
:)

So I never comment....

But I have to say that if I were to have a erotic story that I didn't know I wanted this would be it. Roller derby, viking sized gingers, ice hockey and Canadian beer? it's like you went into my brain and wrote exactly what I love. I'm so excited for the rest of this.