Decent enough story, or start of a story, but needs editing. I know you say you don't need an editor, but have you actually read what you've written rather than what you think you have.
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Decent enough story, or start of a story, but needs editing. I know you say you don't need an editor, but have you actually read what you've written rather than what you think you have.
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