My Daughter Jessica Ch. 01

Sad to say, but I've read this before

I've read this story before and this same type of story so many times.
(Daddy, Daughter, Diary)

Your broke it up though and that was totally distracting. Didn't finish reading it. Please try a different format and some originality.
Try to do a different scene, names, come from a different direction. The seduction of a Father and the Father finding out is overdone, but with a new twist here and there it could be a blast to read about.

Cant wait to read more of this

Wow

I totally can't wait to read more!

drivel

waste of space

Oh dear

Oh dear oh dear, so very short yet I still managed to fall asleep.

5

great read to short but still good. 5

WOW!

You are a Lucky Dad!

Good story.

Good story. For those of you that would leave negative feedback, how about writing your own story if you think you're so much fucking better! Instead of tearing someone down, how about some ideas as to how it could be better? Or do you like the imagination, talent or vocabulary for that? Just saying...

Ignore the haters. I'm enjoying it, Daddy :)

Fantastic Story

Loved the story for its erotic theme. Aptly described their actions especially how she planned the seduction of her dad. Although the story was a bit on the short side, the flow of the story was great.

Good Story

What kind of wankers leave you negative feedback anonymously! I swear some of those losers couldn't write a dirty limerick.

IMHO, you could have lenghtened the plot more but I still enjoyed the story.
I'd be happy to beta buddy with you. PM me if your interested. G.

Well done! More please

Lets hear the rest