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Intrigue filled chapter
Enjoying the way this is developing
Carefully planned chapter
Gives the reader some ideas to mull over.....
Hello!
Thanks for the love, guys and gals! Love knowing you enjoy the no-sex chapters as well. I like long, messy sex scenes full of dialogue and character interaction (and expect many more in the future), but the no-sex chapters are really vital to push the story forward.
Please feel free to comment, critique, praise, and offer suggestions.
Interesting
Keep up the good work
Getting interesting !
Really enjoying the character development and I loved the way Jack has captured Antoinette's interest . Hope that doesn't take a turn for the worst.
Only part that bothers me is the way Jack is constantly referred to as a "cute little boy" . Makes me think they are bunch of child molesters , it's fucked up.
Other than that this is awesome 👍 Keep up the great work
awesome
please continue writing
i love this story
any update on ch. 05
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