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LOL, today seems to be penthouse forum letter day. Little skill and less imagination.
Stay Retired*
This was bad!!!!1
Congratulations
It is not every day you read a story where the word "fuck" is used as a noun, verb, adjective and adverb.
Is it just me or was fuck, fuckers, fucking etc used way too much, over the top. Crap story. 1*
shoulda
had a cuck warning #1. TK
If true...these two deserve each other...
If true...these two deserve each other...They don't love or respect each other...they are just two fuck buddies that happened to be married by chance...1*
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cuck shit.
I get a kick out of this one
I think some writers just love to present a story to mess with our minds...to me this is one of them...Not my cup of tea or shot of scotch but I see a bit of smile on the face of the drafter of this one.. However, Please make this your last of one in this direction.
Odd, to waste your time on such pathetic trash.
Only took a moment to read, so I'm good with it. And its not like you've got anything else worth doing.
Fuckity-fuck-fuck
"Are you a fucking slut, you fucking slut?"
"Fuck yeah I am. Do you fucking like that?"
"Fuck yeah I do. How many fucking cocks can you fuck in one fucking afternoon?"
"I don't fucking know, but I'm gonna fucking find out."
"Then I'm gonna invite every fucking strange man in this fucking hotel to fuck your fucking fuckhole raw while I sit in the fucking corner and watch. Okay, you fucking slut?"
"Fuck yeah, baby!"
What the fuck was this?
a fucker who wants his wife to fuck as many fuckers as she can? Now that's a fucking wife that only a fucker would want to fuck.
"fordcurry" you really are a fucker.
So? How the fuck are you?
I'm doing well. Thank you. And how the fuck are you? I see you're into fucking the fucking slut wife who likes to fuck other fuckers that don't give a fuck about you. Well as far as I'm concerned this is a fucking story I could have done without, after all there are way to many of these fucking stories here today. I'm moving on, because really , I just don't give a fuck about today's stories. Sorry, tell somebody who gives a fuck.
somebody just learned a new word
and is trying it out. Either that or the author wrote for Deadwood.
Obviously written by a twelve year old
I haven't seen or heard "fuck" so much in years. Pretty silly. Maybe get an editor?
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Annony now you have!! 5to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote. Fuck you in the heart dear annony!
Hilarous
Never mind the story, the comments are worth five stars. The most hilarious is that "fucking" is a tag on this story. Ya think?
bonnietaylor
Is that the total of "fucks" you got this week? You've been busy fucking around.
Fuck you in the heart dear annony!
No thanks bonnie, I'd rather fuck your fucking cunt, after it's been fucked by another fucker.
re: anonymous-LOL
Please don't call bonny fat, I'd like to think of her as pleasantly plumb. You know, more bounce for the ounce. Once you get to know her, she's very lovable, like a little fuzzy puppy, always licking away. Slurp, slurp.
1*
Vote 1* for every story rated by THE FAT WHORE (she goes by that at work) aka BONNIE/VASTIE!
Mauybe she is (Bonnie) bnutyour old ugly fags with ED will never know . She would piss on you or shit in your mouth but that would be it.
That is her in the photo on her page. Bet your BF doesn't look any where near as nice. So eat shit and die. 5 to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote.
At least she had a mother. NOT two gay fags.
Stay in your basements and suck each other's cocks dear annony. You're no match for anyone. 5 to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote.
hehheehh you'll never have another woman in your life dear annony
you'll have to settle for another old ugly asshole fuck by a fag with ED. Maybe I'd do you with an iron pipe and fill your ass so you couldn't shit for a week. But then you would like that! 5 to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote. asshole of LIT is on your birth certificate. father was a drunken bum named fag and mother a useless whore named asshole. .
hahahaha!!!
still keeping up the double alias pretense, bonnie/vastie?
god, the cunt is not only OLD and FAT but has even a well below average IQ (which means you are VERY DUMB, woman).
old and fat like your mother dear annony
I'm 37 and fit and trim !! And you're a dumbass old ugly fat fag!!. heheh keep talking asshole of lIT!!
I think vastiesmith is pissed off
Three rants in a row talking about herself. We all know she's an asshole, but maybe some of you didn't know that she prefers dining at the Y munching on fur burgers. She's only mad she can't be the slut mentioned in this fucking story. I don't blame her for being angry, after all missing out on a gang bang would piss anybody off.
37? really, vastie?
well, she really looks like shit for that age. that paunch is pretty ugly.
Dinning at the Y is good but you only dine at the gay shop
You are always looking for a BBC to suck dear annony! 5 to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote. Hey annony, old ugly fags with ED should be banned from this site. Go suck a cock!
sorry why would anyone want a sluts left overs and the diseases she carries
you would have to be a total idiot or totally suicidal
It mght have been okay if...
You had spent at least a little time on the why. I mean, he's not the normal cuckold that just stays off to the side, letting her get hers while he gets little if any. He now sees her as a slut and that's exactly how intends to treat her. Fine, but without the why and how she got to this point, it's not a story, just part of one.
what the hell is a gay shop?
Damn bonny you're rambling again. Your comments don't make any sense. Maybe you should get an editor to help you write insults, because you're terrible at it. By the way, why are you answering vasty's comment. Oh hell, I forget, you and her are the same person, aren't you? Two personalities in a fucked up body. Man can't get any worse than that. 1* in honor of the whore of Lit, bonny/vasty.
I hate it when
the comments are better than the story!
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That's a good wife!
So, she's a disease-ridden slut, regularly fucking six different men from a motel room...
....and his response is to get all hot and fuck her, then pimp her out to two additional young bucks? Yeah, she better be charging big and getting regular check-ups to cover the risks of her newfound profession.
Six in one day, though....she better pick it up or raise her standards so she can make enough to cover her legal, medical and living costs when he finally dumps her for his PA at work or the cute little big-tit redhead number from steno.....hell, he might just have a couple of babies with the work-wives and keep the whore busy making money for a nice retirement.
What it lacked in story content, it a
So lacked in characterization and drama, transition, love interest or story development. It was really just a stroker, cheating whore, fuck-fest kind of scene.
This is the type of story that makes the BTB stories REALLY attractive.
IF YOU HAVE NO PLANS TO GO AHEAD
why waste the time and energy in spying, TK U MLJ LV NV
Say what you want about this writer , but
at least he had the guts to put his story out there for all to score, regardless of outcome. That in itself takes a lot of balls, unlike some of these trash writers who turn off voting because they can't take the heat for their trash stories.
Author I got a chuckle out of your story and the comments it received where hilarious. That in itself is a positive. 5* for taking the abuse, at least you got the balls to take it. That says a lot.
My wife and I
We liked the story. And I learned a new word or two thanks. My wife and I have crazy fantacies as well maybe we will write one down some day. :-)
Fuckadadooda fuckadedee
what a wonderful day. Fuck a little here, fuck a little there. Fuck a little everywhere.
Fuck a little bonny, fuck a little vasty. Fuck them both in the ass, oh, what a feat watching the cum run down to their feet.
Annoy asshole has really lost it today This POS trying to
write and sounds like a fucking roaster w/o a dick. Ash his wife. She told us she v\cheated on him their entire marriage and he loves licking your pussy clean every weekend. Then she let him put his cocketter in her and laugh at him. 5 I gave this a 5 to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote. Hey annony your momma takes it in her ass. So does your sister, in fact so does your facther. They all love squatting over your face and shitting on you , just like your old lady did to you your entire life!!
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