- All
Comments (12) - Add a
Comment - Send
Feedback Send private anonymous feedback to the author (click here to post a public comment instead).
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
No suggestions needed we think.
You certainly don't need any suggestions, just keep going where you are headed.
Great story
You have to keep it going
A bit let down.
I was hoping for a love connection. Oh, well.
This story was a letdown compared to part 1. I expected an emotional connection between the two, a love affair sort of thing, not "sex for the sake of sex" kind of stuff.
Sisters
Great story that keeps getting better, how many sisters can he cope with?
While i wasn't expecting a connection i was expecting more from Vonnie then the cold shut down. I also didn't think the sister would come back until part 3. A little disappointing compared to your others but not bad at all.
agree with minniejohn
it's your story boss and I for one like where it is going and think you are a great storyteller so take it wherever you want. just my thoughts :)
-ahaz
Mrs. Auntie
Sorry but he needs to marry auntie,if only secretly,and knock her up.
Sis?No kids but ,slip it in deep!
Good 2-parter! HOT stuff!
Say what?
You wrote "only it was Christmas, my birthday, and the Fourth of July all rolled into one."
Why would a Canadian kid care about the Fourth of July, anyway?
Author here
I was implying the excitement of fireworks, but I guess that didn't come through properly. If I had said Victoria Day, when Canada has fireworks, I'm sure I would get comments not understanding the reference.
Oh well......
Sorry about the nit-pickers. Why can't they just enjoy the ride?
Like a previous writer, I don't normally read incest stories, but was hooked by the word "panties," because in my youth I was a panty-sniffer, and loved it. About your story: it was very well-written and well-paced and a joy to read. I just finished reading "Here Cums the Bride" also, and liked it. But this was your best.
Can't wait for the upcoming adventures of these three
Fantastic story so far. I was kind of like Danny, except i was the oldest and only boy of 4 siblings. Please keep up the great work, I am looking forward to the next chapters of this story. :)
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Auntie's Panties Pt. 02 or
More submissions by ilikeithot6308.