This story was a letdown compared to part 1. I expected an emotional connection between the two, a love affair sort of thing, not "sex for the sake of sex" kind of stuff.
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Anonymous04/15/16
Sisters
Great story that keeps getting better, how many sisters can he cope with?
While i wasn't expecting a connection i was expecting more from Vonnie then the cold shut down. I also didn't think the sister would come back until part 3. A little disappointing compared to your others but not bad at all.
Sorry but he needs to marry auntie,if only secretly,and knock her up.
Sis?No kids but ,slip it in deep!
Good 2-parter! HOT stuff!
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Anonymous05/03/16
Say what?
You wrote "only it was Christmas, my birthday, and the Fourth of July all rolled into one."
Why would a Canadian kid care about the Fourth of July, anyway?
I was implying the excitement of fireworks, but I guess that didn't come through properly. If I had said Victoria Day, when Canada has fireworks, I'm sure I would get comments not understanding the reference.
Oh well......
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Anonymous05/12/16
Sorry about the nit-pickers. Why can't they just enjoy the ride?
Like a previous writer, I don't normally read incest stories, but was hooked by the word "panties," because in my youth I was a panty-sniffer, and loved it. About your story: it was very well-written and well-paced and a joy to read. I just finished reading "Here Cums the Bride" also, and liked it. But this was your best.
Can't wait for the upcoming adventures of these three
Fantastic story so far. I was kind of like Danny, except i was the oldest and only boy of 4 siblings. Please keep up the great work, I am looking forward to the next chapters of this story. :)
English
No suggestions needed we think.
You certainly don't need any suggestions, just keep going where you are headed.
Great story
You have to keep it going
A bit let down.
I was hoping for a love connection. Oh, well.
This story was a letdown compared to part 1. I expected an emotional connection between the two, a love affair sort of thing, not "sex for the sake of sex" kind of stuff.
Sisters
Great story that keeps getting better, how many sisters can he cope with?
While i wasn't expecting a connection i was expecting more from Vonnie then the cold shut down. I also didn't think the sister would come back until part 3. A little disappointing compared to your others but not bad at all.
agree with minniejohn
it's your story boss and I for one like where it is going and think you are a great storyteller so take it wherever you want. just my thoughts :)
-ahaz
Mrs. Auntie
Sorry but he needs to marry auntie,if only secretly,and knock her up.
Sis?No kids but ,slip it in deep!
Good 2-parter! HOT stuff!
Say what?
You wrote "only it was Christmas, my birthday, and the Fourth of July all rolled into one."
Why would a Canadian kid care about the Fourth of July, anyway?
Author here
I was implying the excitement of fireworks, but I guess that didn't come through properly. If I had said Victoria Day, when Canada has fireworks, I'm sure I would get comments not understanding the reference.
Oh well......
Sorry about the nit-pickers. Why can't they just enjoy the ride?
Like a previous writer, I don't normally read incest stories, but was hooked by the word "panties," because in my youth I was a panty-sniffer, and loved it. About your story: it was very well-written and well-paced and a joy to read. I just finished reading "Here Cums the Bride" also, and liked it. But this was your best.
Can't wait for the upcoming adventures of these three
Fantastic story so far. I was kind of like Danny, except i was the oldest and only boy of 4 siblings. Please keep up the great work, I am looking forward to the next chapters of this story. :)
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