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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/15/16

Wow! Just wow!!

Oh! My! God! This is one of the best stories I have read on here so far. It is so fucking hot! I loved the sensuality of it all. It felt that they were making love, not just having sex. Well done!

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by Anonymous04/16/16

Wow...

Fantasies written out!!!

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by de_gr04/17/16

You are good at descriptions

By reading your story I am amazed at how well I can follow every movement your characters make. This clearly a strong point in your writing. My problem with this story is that since its only one long sex scene I got bored with it somewhere in the middle. I read until the end and I am happy they enjoyed themselves but I dont care much about it.

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