Oh! My! God! This is one of the best stories I have read on here so far. It is so fucking hot! I loved the sensuality of it all. It felt that they were making love, not just having sex. Well done!
By reading your story I am amazed at how well I can follow every movement your characters make. This clearly a strong point in your writing. My problem with this story is that since its only one long sex scene I got bored with it somewhere in the middle. I read until the end and I am happy they enjoyed themselves but I dont care much about it.
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Wow! Just wow!!
Oh! My! God! This is one of the best stories I have read on here so far. It is so fucking hot! I loved the sensuality of it all. It felt that they were making love, not just having sex. Well done!
Wow...
Fantasies written out!!!
You are good at descriptions
By reading your story I am amazed at how well I can follow every movement your characters make. This clearly a strong point in your writing. My problem with this story is that since its only one long sex scene I got bored with it somewhere in the middle. I read until the end and I am happy they enjoyed themselves but I dont care much about it.
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