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by cowbulls04/15/16

interesting

I liked the originality but the sex was too quick. I want to read details of the two guys taking her. I also think they would have switched and had a second helping.

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by Anonymous04/15/16

Very Choppy

It has the seeds of a good story but the writing seems to be just connected thoughts.

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by Anonymous04/16/16

Get an editor

And try again. Or do a much better job of proof reading.

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