All Comments on 'Curious Girls Ch. 23'

The car was definitely unexpected, i do love the way this turned out things could get really interesting now.. Im guessing the sd card is destroyed now? But why only 2 pages? You normally have 3 or 4, i know you just posted this but when will the next one be out. I dont mean to hurry you lol i just expected more pages

Fantastic. I wonder what Sarah will wake up to.

My current count of single chapter release is at 10, double chapter releases at 5, and triple chapter releases at 1.

So, to say I usually write 3-4 pages is an overstatement. :-) However, if it makes you feel better, I think this may be my longest single chapter release to date. Unfortunately, my pace of writing had slowed of late, and I seem to be closer to one chapter every two months. I'm not particularly happy with that pace, but we'll see how the next month goes. I'm about due to sit down and do a comprehensive review of where I was planning to take the story and the ideas/suggestions I've received to see if the story is still going where I want and whether or not I can include more reader feedback. This type of work can take a while and slow down a chapter release, but it should improve the quality and speed of later chapters!

However, I am glad you're enjoying the story!

Everyone else, I greatly appreciate your feedback either here or directly to my email, I'd like to remind you that unless you enter your email address when sending direct feedback, I cannot reply back to you. :-)

Love the direction the story is taking!

Would LOVE more breast smother action though, those tiny bits were the best

Yes i am enjoying it very much lol seriously the curious girls story is probably the best on here.. But anyway i was thinking maybe since sara is most likely gonna be in the Hospital you could have tamara start targeting krista since sara never gave the chip back you know, just an idea have krista think tamara is still into her or something atleast until sara gets out? Cause shes definitely gonna have to be in the hospital right

Amber should come back and rescue sara.

This story is the best omg it is very hot, and i agree with the anonymous guy below. I wiuld love to see tamara abuse krista , too, using the fact that krista likes her to het advantage. Some scenes i liked and would like to see again-facesitting in public (like tamara almost getting arrested. Have sara be unwillingly facesat and tamaras scheme almost found out by help, but something makes the help leave or tamara tricks them while sara cant talk), boob smothering (forcefully), foot scenes (i loved the new years scene when tamara shoved her foot in saras mouth, as well as the movie scene), the twister scene was also very hot. Thanks!

Tamara should abuse sara in hospital and be covered with this by doctor or nurse. :)

When sara lay on the hospital bed, Tamara should talk with doctor about Sara, Tamara should say Doctor ,,me and Sara are a couple,, and then she facesit Sara in the hospital. :) sorry about my english, Im Polish. Thanks. :)

We want more Tamara pushing her Tongue into Sara's mouth, and Sara should be scared and disgusted.

You can add 69 position into story and position: ,,two girls cross their legs pushing their pussies against one another,, of course with force.

I hope we get to see vengeful Tamera immerge since Sara stole her blackmail material and that she obviously was not as willing to go down on Tamera as she made it seem. If Sara is trapped in a full body cast, I can only imagine what Tamera will be able to do without Sara being able to defend herself.

want more i think sara should get the best of tamara this time but she finds out she just isn't just straight anymore

i realy liked your story .actually so much that i looked sometimes if the story was upquated and i have never done that with a erotic story before. up until chapter 17/18 i must say fantastic story ( i had naturally some downs too for example i never liked that tamara could always come in the house even as windows ,doors were double and trible secured it made the story implausible and that is never good for a story.) but since then the story came much to predictable and a bit boring. every chapter always the same sex acts and always sara lose to tamara and every time she trust her again (again not plausible).maybe i am a bit harsh ,because i read the story for the releationship between the sisters and hoped it could develop into something romantically, and not your probably intend sub dom relationship between sara and tamara. nevertheless i have to say that every "kissing practice" session was more erotic for me than the pussy in the face between sara and tamara. but again i am probably not your target audience. like i already said it still is a intresting story and that i wrote a review with my terrible english shows it

Lets see what Tamara can do now if Sara is incapacitated!

Loved this new instalment!! However i think that Tamara should act upon the threats she made in chapters 10/11 seeing as Sara is obviously not "progressing/submitting" as quickly as Tamara hoped. So now Sara is injured she will have no chance to stop tamara doing a little toilet play :)

Thanks again and wouldnt mind hearing back to see if these threats will ever happen (even if its not in tbe next chapter)

Yay new chapter.

Maybe it's time for Sara to witness Tamara enslaving Krista now?

I LOVED the plot twist at the end, amazing work, can't wait till the next one :3.

Like anon2 said, I would also like to see the threats from chapters 10/11 happen :P

Fantastic. I hope to see some more strap on action or Tamara continuing to break Sara. Maybe by siccing Amber on Krista?

23 chapters of abuse and serial rape. No wonder so many college girls end up assaulted and in abusive relationships. Everyone seems to be perfectly okay with it.

You must add some ,,tribbing,, between Tamara and Sara.

Perhaps Krista gets involved now.

Wow i didn't expect that at all ! I love this story so much you're the best. Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Christa will be involved.

Like others below I'd like to see the threats from 10/11 re emerge even if they are not acted upon I think just the threat of them would spice it up a lot. Perhaps now that Sara is incapacitated then it would be easy for Tamara to start her threats but maybe she gets interrupted by a nurse before she can carry out the threat. The dynamic with Krista getting with Michael I found annoying as the story was making good progress at twisting Krista against Sara and driving Tamara and Krista into common ground. A different spin it would also be interesting for a time gap from a coma or something where Tamara has had time to discover Krista's feelings and manipulating her to her side without Sara knowing until too late when they trap her together. Thanks for sticking at this story

Everytime your chapters trance me into the story. I feel like i can read this all day! Awesome job i love tamara and how shes so dominate and kinky. Curious to see where things go ;)

Another great chapter! Please keep up the good work and continue this masterpiece.

Update on your progress?

Unfortunately, my progress has been slow. Well, my progress on the actual chapter has been slow. However, I've been spending a lot of time trying to work out the direction I want the final chapters to go. I worked out much of the story outline at the beginning and revised it as I went. However, I've finally reached the more vague portion of my outline. I've found that I needed to research some sections, work out the timing and order of events, etc. Some things I'd originally planned just don't work anymore due to character development, new ideas, etc.

Tl;dr, I'm about 30-40% done with the initial draft of Chapter 24.

Some of the content of this is borderline for me but I keep reading because I must know what happens at the end but if piss or shit content comes up I'm just going to have to stop. Yes I could always just skip over those scenes but even knowing that sort of thing as occurred is enough to turn me off a story completely. Call me weird if you must, just as I'll call people who enjoy that sort of thing weird

I appreciate your feedback! I still haven't decided how far I want to go with that yet. I know it's a popular request, but I also know it's something that many would find offputting. Out of curiosity, would you still find it objectionable if I were to add such content into a clearly marked alternate chapter while releasing an otherwise identical chapter at the same time which does not contain this type of content?

I would carry on reading if your idea of separate chapters was put into place as that suits me fine, just as long as the only difference is of course with said toilet play.

I think having an alternate chapter with toilet play contenr while another without is a very good idea and would keep everyone interested

Very curious to know if you are going to switch tamara' s focus towards Krista now as that is also something I think readers of this story have been wanting, and considering Sarah got hit by a car now is as good a time as any if Sarah is put in the hospital.

What I'm going to say will sound contradictory - I have no intention of reading about toilet play, but write the story that is true for your characters. If either version of the chapter can happen than neither will matter as the effect of them can just be handwaved as "Tamara did something horrible" and both chapters can effectively be ignored. Write the story what YOUR Tamara does to YOUR Sara (or Krista or whoever else) and let people enjoy them or not. If you try to please everyone, you'll please no-one.

That said, at this point in the story, it feels like Tamara is confused about Sara - what was a powertrip seems to be mixed up with an attempt to make Sara her real girlfriend. To my mind the toilet play doesn't fit, but that is my conception of the characters, I see Tamara doing more with her strap-on or maybe fisting Sara than something gross that would make her see Sara as something disgusting

Just wondering if you could give an estimate of when the next chapter will be posted? Will it be in June or do we need to wait til July or later?

I'm certainly aiming for June! My rough draft is probably 55-65% done (assuming I don't try to make this a double chapter). I appreciate everyone's patience. Not only has work been keeping me busier than usual the last few weeks, but this chapter has been a little more challenging to write due to the change in direction. :-)

We appreciate you putting so much work into the continuation of the series despite work keeping you very busy! I look forward to seeing another chapter in the coming month or so and I'm sure it will be as good as always!

I see many comments about how to do that and not do that and that.

I think it's a good idea to have toilet play in this. No I'm not saying I like piss and shit. But I think of it in another way, It's the most disgusting thing Tamara can do. And Tamara is using Sara, has always done that. And the ending of this chapter was Sara trying to get out of this "Blackmail". So The Tamara I know would have humiliate Sara in the most disgusting way, so Sara learns her lesson.

While I admit I to screaming out in frustration with so many of Sara's missteps (lately it feels like she's making all the worst decisions imaginable), I understand the need for conflict and I know the difficulties when trying to resolve a story while keeping true to the characters and content that drew people in. Not an easy task.

I'm trying to refrain from making any specific suggestions, since you already have an outline and we should trust you on this. I just want to highlight how much I've enjoyed the little heart-tugs caused by seeing how genuinely Sara cares about Krista, and vice-versa. And with all the careful clues you've been dropping throughout the chapters, I can't help but wonder ... but maybe I'm reading too much into it.

Regardless, Sara's and Krista's sweet relationship has been like a breath of fresh air between those suffocating sessions with the force of nature that is Tamara. Should you choose to snuff it out, for me the final bit of heart the story had would be gone, but I would still thank you for the journey.

You're an amazing writer, and congrats to sticking with this story for 2 years - a rare accomplishment. And also very much appreciated - you actually talking to your audience.

i have read some of the comments for this story and have to say that i feel exactly like jessica (I THINK S WAS IT)

the highlight of this story is the special relationship between the sisters

i am not sure if you did it purposely but the small hints that specially krista could feel more than just sisterly love are so perfect set and subtile that is very interesting to read about it (specially because it is not in your face) and even (have never thought i would said that about a porn) romatic. therefore i hope that their relationship will be put in the focus and that in the end they a some kind of the ending paring (BUT PLEASE NOT POLOGAMY WITH TAMARA).

i know that sounds selfish and is only my opinion but i prefer that you don t make toitlet games(don't really like to read about that) and not a spin off either simply because i hate stories with more endings where the author tries to make it every reader right and you don't knw what is the real ending and i think that a alternative plot would feel similar

nevertheless for your decisions thanks for the time you have invest in this story h e serum

Brilliant story. Very well done plot and the characters are human. I would like to see a Krista/Sara paring when/if Sara breaks free of Tamara. I started reading a while ago when you only had 3 out. Then I left and was left thinking about it after a particularly nasty break up. So I checked up and sure enough it had continued on exponentially.

Now that I've rediscovered this the only thing I can think of is the next chapter.

I give it a 5 Star rating...

Thank you all so much for the recent feedback! You guys are why I keep staying motivated to write. While I do have as plan for the story, which I hope everyone will enjoy, there is also much that is in flux, and your feedback has helped with that.

On that note, the initial draft of Chapter 24 is finished, but I tried out a direction that I thought would work well. I still like it more in many respects, but I realized after writing the majority of the chapter (and getting some reader feedback) that it leaves a lot of plot holes and questions which are hard to answer coherently. I spent a week or so trying to iron out all the issues this new chapter would create, only to realize the only logical choice was to abandon that idea and go in a more straightforward direction I still like, but just not quite as much.

That said, it will require a somewhat significant amount of effort to re-write portions of the chapter. Don't worry, there is much of the chapter which is just fine the way it is. I'm still targeting for releasing sometime this month.

I would like to see the use of anal beads butt plugs anal vibrators plz add

Is there any ETA on the next chapter?

Hi i would also like to know an eta for ch. 24. Can you release the next chapter tomorrow plss. Actually could you aim to release it in 3 days ish, because i love this series a lot and would love to see more.

Thanks

This series is my favorite of all I have read on this site. Can't wait for the next installment. Sidenote, I know it's your story, but I wish the part Ch.13 where Tamara was about to shove the used silos down her throat

Do u have a idea of when in july next chapter will be posted?

Just wondering how much longer it's going to be until the next chapter as I know we're all dying to see what happens as its been so long since the last one came out.

All,

I'm going to have to apologize again for the delays. Between life and work, I've had so little time lately to even think about this story, much less write. Don't worry! I'm still committed to finishing this story! Chapters 24 and probably 25 are near completion. I still have a little more to rewrite and then some time to proof read and clean them up.

I won't give an estimate at this point, but I'll try to find some time soon to push through and get these finished!

Thank you all for your continued patience!

Do you mean to say that chapter 25 will be the end of the story? Or are there more chapters after that one?

While the end is in sight, Chapter 25 will definitely not be it. I expect another 5-6 chapters, but that's just a rough number. I find I often tend to underestimate how much story I have left to write. =)

Could you see yourself writing another story after this current one comes to a close in the next several chapters or so? I know many others as well as myself thoroughly enjoy your writing and will be sad as this current story comes to a close, as not only is it very good content wise, but it is so well written and I really get a true feel for the various characters and I think that if you had the time and felt like writing another story once this one eventually finishes, many people would support it and thoroughly enjoy that too.

I've definitely given some consideration to other stories I'd like to write, although I've not devoted too much time as I wanted to stay focused on Curious Girls. I most definitely plan to keep writing, but I'll likely try to stick to shorter stories for a while. Curious Girls has been quite the undertaking, and I don't think I want to get this invested in a single story for the foreseeable future :-)

Then again, when I started, Curious Girls was only supposed to be a few chapters...

Could you add next chapter until 17 july Sir?? :)

Will we ever see more chapters for "Curious Girls"? Really got into this story and can't wait for more chapters.

Absolutely! I finished my draft/re-write, and I'm working on polishing now. I'm cautiously optimistic I should be able to submit within the next week (if nothing else comes up)!