All Comments on 'Trip-Trap'

when she isn't even remotely likable. If she hated her boyfriend, why stay with him for 5 years, why take him back. Sounds like a co-dependent bitch.

Hey, Psychocandy! I love your stuff, and I have a sugestion/request. Try doing Goldilocks next, it would be interesting to see how that story would work out if the bears found her sleeping in their beds naked!

That's a fabulous idea. I might give it a shot! Thanks for the input, and for reading my stuff. I really appreciate it. :D

Love it!!! Be awesome if it was longer.....Snow White would be cool... all those dwarves...

I am a fan of your work, & you have yet to write anything I don't like. You are very creative & talented. I love Treasure the most & am always excited to see an update, as well as wonderful little treats like this story. 😊

Can't wait for more! FIVE STARS, as usual! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

I really liked this story, and was wondering if you would consider making it into a series. I would love to see how their life is after this.

You are seriously such a talented writer!!!!

Everything you make is so wonderful and romantic/erotic! You're a fantastic writer and I love the characters that you create <3

I agree with Hardandpainfull. I think this would make an AMAZING series. But I also can't wait to see what else you come up with. I hope there is some new chapters of Treasure, or any other stories you plan on writing, soon.

Patiently waiting for more,

Your Hopeful Fan

This would make a fantastic series!

You guys are awesome. I'll see what I can do. :D

More please... I wish you could go further into character developmet, but then it would be a novella... Good work! I love the way you write... Hope to see you put out some full-length stories soon.

YOU FUCKING ROCK!!!

Your starsign can only be Aries.

May you become insanely rich, or at least have a lot of fantastic sex for writing down all this crazy stuff.

Thank you!

YOU fucking rock.

I'm a Leo, I'm afraid.

Those are, like, the best two things anyone has ever wished for me.

You're welcome!!!

Spectacularly so. I'm not at all sure how one would continue this story - he'd need some sort of transfomation spell or at least an illusion in order to go anywhere with her in the mundane world... but what if she went with him into some sort of Free City? Journey of romance and discovery and self-discovery, here we go!

Really hope you continue with this one...?

is actually one of the sweetest guys ever. very hot story, but I just loved the dialogue.

It's like 'Fire meets gasoline'. A pleasure to read. Wish there were more chapters of Sylvus and Lucy!!

Hope to read more of your stories including the anticipating fairy tales!!

thank you for writing it. it really made me smile.

I honestly thought I wouldn't like this one because how can you make a troll attractive but you did. You're so good. So good.

Amazing amazing amazing!!!!!

They are adorable! Instead of the overdone fairy tales maybe you'd be interested in something like Baba Yaga or Henny Penny. No demands though, i'd read your interpretation of the phonebook.