Seducing a Ministers Young Wife Ch. 01

Typos!

Not a bad story though it seems to move quickly from the shy conservative woman to all of the sudden right into sex. Please have someone proofread for you, there are a number of (presumably) typos, things like letters missing from words.

Good Start

I assume you're a relatively new writer by the length of the story and the fact this is only the second story you've published on literotica. Your story had a good hook. All four characters were well defined. Did you ever mention the protagonist name? I read the story twice and never found it, but that's a minor detail. His plan worked well. The conversation between them was excellent, especially his complements. His inner dialogue was very good for a woman (I assume) writing from a male perspective. The pool scene was a great setup for the conclusion. Jill's transformation was a little too quick, and the sex scene was too short, but all it all it was a great storyi.

OMG!

Great story! thanks for that . . . . Looking forward to the next installment

Two things with a short life span is a dog that chases cars, and a man that chases married women.

5 good story suck a cock dear annony and showball it with yuor mother. 5

for a LW story that's starting good

good until the last 3 paragraphs.

why do all these stories have overly large cocks precisely measured. MOST women would either dead faint or run a mile.up til then I thought it wasgoing to be a great intro to an enjoyable love your neighbour story. .

Great start

I love the hypocrisy of the Christian woman who gets fucked by someone besides her preacher husband. Don't stop the story here! Can't wait for the next installment!

Almost

It was the perfect story until the end when they both became porn stars. She should have been hesitant to the end and stop with making the guy have porn star cock. So close, really disappointing ending.

Thanks

new writer/poster Imaginative1a, great start on this one with the young/old theme and neighbors and sexy daughters and all. . . please more soon! Greg

you started this back in May and still aint finish it just let us hanging here