All Comments on 'Erik Nolan Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Great story. Loving the slow build up but you take way long to update. I had to re-read the whole story again

I really hope Amie bullies her son emotionally in the next upcoming chapters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Update

UPDATE???

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

This story has promise to be one of the best in the "mom and son's bully" genre. Please don't stop now just when it's getting to the best part.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Update

I agree, but the updates take too long

Please update

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Good plot, but...

Stop with the Alpha-Omega thing!He talks like a TEEN, not like a MAN!

And I can understand her frustration with her annoying husband, but trying to put her son in the same bucket don't sits well.Do you know why?Because she MADE part of what her son is today.Blaming him is blaming herself, and that's make her a failure as a mother.You could make her realize that and trying to correct it.Make Erik fuck her in front of him telling her her son should learn how to please a woman(and don't be like his loser dad).

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Very Hot!

Love the change in Amie. It was so hot when she talked about her "loser son," not feeling a bit of guilt for putting him down in front of Erik. Good to see this kind of story. The cuckold son fetish doesn't get enough air time.

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