A Long Time Cumming

So they knew each other how long ago? What do they look like other than chisled, hazel eyes, and 44DD? The story isn't a story, it's an idea. There's nothing to suggest why this is interracial (or any category for that matter). There's no meat to it, nothing of substance, just a meaningless setting with very little context. Were you in a rush to put this up for reading? This isn't even a chapter, it's barely a preface. 2 stars: 1 for the idea and 1 for the balls to post.

Well thanks..

Well thanks for the comment..there is a part 2 with all the back story but please don't trouble urself reading it since u found this offering so paltry..i wouldn't what to offend ur delicate sensibilities again..

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I liked it just needed little more info. If there is a part two please give little more info.

Thanks. Keep up good work.

This was excellent.

A nice bite-sized morsel of a tale. Sure, a little more detail would've been nice, but it was still hot and erotic. Loved it!

5 Stars. Keep writing! :)

Re: well thanks

Way to go handling criticism with grace, very classy.

Re: thanks

I handled it with as much tact and grace as it was given..maybe u should consider ur words and there impact before commenting..just a thought..

Part 2 Please!

Please make a part 2! This was amazing! I love this! I need a part 2!

Interesting beginning...

Just enough to lure readers in...yes, it may lack details but banking on things being explained...soon? Please keep writing.