If so, extremely impressive. Nicely written and very believable; both are keys to a good first time story. Even if Andrew didn't go all the way in this chapter, you set him up perfectly to lose his virginity to Melissa, at least I presume. Anyhow, nice job. Keep writing please!
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Awesome
Great story, and if there really is a Paul, you better have his back forever.
Was this your first story?
If so, extremely impressive. Nicely written and very believable; both are keys to a good first time story. Even if Andrew didn't go all the way in this chapter, you set him up perfectly to lose his virginity to Melissa, at least I presume. Anyhow, nice job. Keep writing please!
Please continue
I hope there will Mode.
Next chapter?
Good chapter hope you continue with it.
please do the next chapter
Please carry on the story it's so good
Nice!
I agree with previous comments...next ch?
Can't wait to see how he interacts with Melissa.
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