I Seduced My Dad at the Gym

Believability??

I simply did not believe this story

Realistic?

Sadly not.
It is a pity you rushed straight to full aggressive sex, when the story had started out so well. I expected things to slowly develop as they would do if this was even a remotely true story that you say it is.

Just awful

Good build up and then it just sort of happened, not beleivable at all and usually I wouldn't mind that except you tried to convince the reader it was! Why was it so rough straight away? You'd expect some sort of hesitance if you're about to fuck you're daughter in a public place for the first time....

Looking forward to more

Really???

You had me going about seducing your dad, But then it all happened too fast. I gave it the lowest score I could because the first words out of his mouth were "suck it Bitch"??? That is when I stopped reading and posted my low score!!!

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm:

here's1st.offhere's - - didn't read entire story only bits only pieces
NOW THAT'S BEEN SAID did enjoy the portions did read buttttttttttttttt
i'll agree other comments other posts : you rushed way2damnquickly \
i've also don't believe this true ............... you best continue this you best
take time explain everything you best make longer :-) :-) :-)

This Is Good****

You could write on this for about 9 or 10 different stories. I have read a many of good ones that started like this one. Keep up the good story telling. Thanks for sharing.

You're fucking your daughter for the first time and calling her bitch, whore, slut, shoving your dick down her throat, smacking her ass?! Hell, if thats how he treats his own virgin daughter for first time sex, in public no less, lol, its no wonder his wife quit fucking him, she prolly needs therapy after dealing with his ass! Rofl.