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My Name is Jake Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/19/16

from the first sentence of this excellent story, we know

that the author is part of the new generation of young males. "My name is Jake and I am a mother fucker. I fuck my mother." Boys like Jake--and there are more and more of them all the time--aren't secretive about their favorite activity. They are downright proud of being motherfuckers, of shoving their cock up that hairy hole between their mother's thighs, the same hole they came out of. Damn proud of stuffing and stretching, slamming and pounding their own mother's cunt, till they blow their young balls and fill their mommy to the brim with their semen. They laugh at all the other sons who can only whack off dreaming of their mommy's glorious pussy, her snatch, her gash, her babyhole, her twat, mom's warm wet ever-loving CUNT! Those poor saps shoot their load all over their stomach and chest as they whimper "oh, mom," while guys like Jake are on top of their mother, spurting their strong jets of sperm right up inside her, painting mom's tender pink twat walls a nice sticky white. Any fucking time they just fucking feel like it.

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by Anonymous04/19/16

Good ideas

Good ideas but not put together well. Keep writing, you have a lot to offer

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by TSreader04/24/16

Love it!

So good! A Plus sized read :) thank you!

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by Anonymous01/13/17

Anonymous

Damn Anonymous write your own story S3lwyncd0g doesn't need your help. You remind me of an leach.

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